"No other family" and "three other" as the other two, the narrative poem, "the narrator" is not the author, but the poem's hero. The protagonist is once again was conscripted into the army of the bachelor, he neither man farewell, and no one can leave, however, _set_ foot on the occasion of the journey, still can not help himself, as if God is telling him no home may be another tragedy.
From the beginning to the "One, two old widow," a total of fourteen, the total return home after the chaos seen in writing, and to "cheap sub for array failed, the return of the old footpath to find" a few words _insert_ed in the middle, will be separated into the large segment two sections. Before the short to recount the originator, write the self-proclaimed "cheap child" after the soldiers returned home and saw their home beyond recognition, a desert, so ask this Yi Xi, general tells his hometown of past and present changes. "Lonely Tempo, the Park House but Artemisia arborescens", these two positive write this, but have been hidden behind the past. "Tempo after" case, then the Tempo before what? So naturally, leads to the next two. At that time, "I am in the hundred," should be the Garden Cottage River, Along the course, not alone; "Tempo after" the aftermath of world disorder, ranking each of whom something, Park House abandoned, Artemisia arborescens (weeds) ridden, naturally lonely. With the head to use the "lonely" word, rendering the scene depression everywhere, showing the hero caught the attention of the sad sad mood, _set_ the tone for the whole poem. "World chaos" word and "Tempo after the" echo of the past and present written reasons for the changes, but also point to understand the "no home" may "not" source. "Deposit had no news, the deceased was dust and mud," two, tight for the "chaos of the world stuff" from, such as the smell of "I" sigh of the sound, strong performance of the hero's sadness.
A short summary before the picture, then after a short description of details, the "cheap sub for array fails, return to find the old footpath," the past and, as a transition. "Find" words portray the finest of the "old" word meaning deep and wide. Home of the "old Seikei," through a thousand times, eyes closed will not get lost, and now have to "find" the face appear longer old, has long been submerged Artemisia arborescens. "Used" to recover past, should be "I'm in the hundred"; "find" ask this word should be "Garden Cottage but Artemisia arborescens." "The long line see the empty roadway, at thin air miserable desolate. But fox and raccoon dog, vertical hair angry I cry. Neighborhood where all the, twelve old widow," to write "cheap child" from near the village to enter the village of Lane, visiting neighbors. "Long line" for the "find the old footpath", the transfer to "find" the word of God. Short distance and take a long time line, we prove that the old Seikei is extremely difficult to identify, find Laixun to go around a lot of detours. "Empty Lane" words and nobody should be "World chaos all things." "Japan desolate miserable thin air," one, with the anthropomorphic view into the way financial situation, express a hero, "see empty Lane" when the miserable state of mind. "But for Fox and raccoon dog" and "but" word in front of the "empty" words take care of. When the "hundred" _set_tlement, village Lane in coming and going, laughing Xuan Tian; now only with fox relative. And those "Fox and raccoon dog" actually become masters, saw the "I" on the ridge of hair bristling, Nujiao at me as if to blame the "I" should not break into their homes. Visited neighbors, found that only "one or two old widow," is still alive! To see them, and naturally much to ask to say, but these are all omitted Du confused, leaving the reader to imagine the space ride. When read back, "never hurt long illness, the mother of five appointed ditch River", it is easy to see with the "old widow" question and answer each other emotional content and expression.
"Suniao love the sticks, safety speech and poor habitat. Square Spring hoe alone, Higurashi also irrigation furrow." ─ ─ This self-contained section of the structure, write, life after their hometown hero. The first two sentences, to Suniao as metaphor, showing the feelings of nostalgia native. After a few words, write a sad love hero With daytime began the hard work, hope to live at home, no matter how poor and the fox alone!
Last paragraph, but leave no home to write. "Xian Li and me to, so called learning drums scabbard," suddenly from the waves. The following six layers of transition. "Although from the state reserve, nothing to bring in consultants," This is the first layer of turns; the sentence from the fortune, the next sentence from the injury. Although the state service, but the care of nothing, neither human "I" off, nor things to carry, how can we not make the "I" sad! "In recent behavior one, finally turn away fans," This is the second layer transition. "Over the last line," left alone, has been very sad; but as a soldier, after all, have to go the front line in the future, the future is really confused, where the unknown buried! "Home only Dangjin, distance management is also homogeneous," which is the third layer transition. Back to a thought, then an empty home has finishes, "near the line," "away" and what difference! Six poetic cadence, layers of depth, nuanced portrait of a hero after hearing so called psychological changes. If Xuxi said: "Write this point, you can ZZZZZZZZZ now!" (See Yang Lun "Du Mirror Civil" argument) Confirming Du Fu mentioned the "independent open the dough," the technique of expression, said: "... ... there through layer method. such as "Do Homeless" articles Cloud: 'Xian Li and me to, so called learning drums scabbard.' off the removal of the homeless from the levy, do not bear too great; then say so unbearable, the taste will be shallow. This cloud 'home only Dangjin, distance management is also homogeneous', converted to broad-minded, Mi see bitter carry on. "
"Yong long illness, pain, the mother of five appointed ditch the river. Angry with me are not effective, life-long cries of the two acids." Despite the strong outlook for tat, since the width of the self, and finally the saddest thing in my heart: even before the previous candidate long illness of his aging mother in the "I" died during the five years of military service! Death and not "I" buried river channel that commissioned bone! This makes "me" life is sad. These few, very pain of death to write home, home break of the miserable. So closely subject to language as a rhetorical statement: "Life is not no home, how to steam Lebanon!" ─ ─ have no home, even arrested, as people do people do?
Poems in "no other family," wrote the first large section of chaos seen after the return home to hero line near the village, Village Lane divided into levels, from far and near, in order. Only the general picture of long-term, close range while describing the details. Write the hero's third-largest segment of mental activity, but also layers of turning points, the more turn deeper, penetrating characterization. Level of clarity, structure, careful and precise. Poets also use Conciseness, graphic language, writing rich characteristic things. Poem "Garden Cottage but Artemisia arborescens", "but Fox and raccoon dog," general stronger. "Artemisia arborescens", "fox", where the rich features of things. Who can tolerate in their own room in the hospital garden full of Artemisia arborescens? In densely populated village, the fox dare lawless? "Garden Cottage but Artemisia arborescens", "but the fox and raccoon dog", just ten words, put the inhabitants in the extinction, like the Tin House abandoned the miserable living out of painting. Others such as "how all the neighbors? Twelve old widow," is full of characteristic. Because it is "old widow," so there can linger. Little will come in handy, if not prior to escape, they are bound by official arrested. The hero of the poem is not just a return to their villages, they were taken to it? Poetry in the first person, makes the hero directly to come forward and tell the reader what he had seen, encountered, the flu, so not only through the performance of the lyrical character of the subjective state of mind of people, but also reflected by the environment description of the characters thoughts and feelings. A few years ago was taken away to military service official, "I" survived, returned home with great difficulty, full flesh and blood that can meet the neighborhood; but it did not, to see is a "Artemisia arborescens", into the one " Empty Lane "is the vertical hair Nujiao encountered the fox, ... ... is really everywhere sad, mixed feelings! So the first days of looked thinner. "Day" does not matter too fat, because of his sad mood, which saw the sunlight dark, sad scene. Because of scenes, characterization and description of environment integration, they are able in a short space in the shape of a flesh and blood characters, reflecting the common experience at the theater, the ruler of the brutal, corrupt, the powerful lashing .
Zhengdong Fu in "Du Poems," says the song "Do not homeless," "shirt poor people do not have thorns." Pu from the dragon in "Reading Du heart understanding", said: "'Why is steam Lebanon?' Can be used for six (referring to the" Three Officials "and" Three Do ") summary. Against their words to the phase quality, straight to the cloud: ' Why people on? '"─ ─ means: the people's situation into just can not do people, how do people master it? Look, the two researchers Du feudal "no home do not," the ideological significance of the understanding, actually deserves reference.
(Huo Songlin)【Source】 卷217_36
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