Element and four (809) March, Yuan Zhen as ambassador to monitor Dongchuan by the prison censor, between the pommel horse, the written "make Dongchuan," a group of quatrains. Later, Bai wrote a twelve and verse, "look the relay station" is one of the first.
Yuan Zhen, "Wang relay station," says: "Poor March Sanxun foot, Chang Wang Wang River Station units. Material may Meng Guang language today, did not spring do not come back!"
Yuan Zhen in March, this is the last day for the missing wife for Wei plexus. Results sentence "did not spring do not come back," the poet is hanging hides the speech. Wife do expect a period of spring, when he reunited, and now it is not possible, wistful feeling, Wan Ran in the head.
Bai and poetry even better. Sentence "in the house when the windows Liu Jing'an," Yuan Zhen's house in Long An Jingan, his wife, Wei Cong time to live, write their own house are reflected in its people. "When the window Liu," which means that pregnant people. Chinese customs, love Willow to grant pedestrians wandering by Liu and thinking. Stir about to take soft long continue to blending with each other feelings, the meaning is not absolute. From this verse, the faintly seen guarding the front of the window every day, Bi Cong Wei Liu, gazing far from the scene read, she remembered her husband too deep! Second sentence, "Wang Qian Pu relay station to spend," Nature is written by Yuan Zhen. Spring-hearted, Fallen flowers everywhere. Di yi he alone, see the person falling and Nianbi flower. This is a clever use of metaphor, rich in associations, and very spare poetry. Phrases "to do the same day two spring" is a good sentence. "Do" words such as Lee knife water, the effect is strong, it has a spring to make men, and people in the horizon of the sentimental emotions. "Spring" not only refers to the spring, and both the good times, good is hope. "Spring on the same day to do", that is, gathered the two dashed expectations. This naturally derived "off-off home homesick people think." Originally, the thought never limited to this day, but this day do both the spring day, this feeling of missing it more heavy. A kind of Acacia, two sadness, feelings of dark line to thousands of miles away hearts closely linked up.
Poetry Center is a "thinking" words. The poem thinks of the character closely, implicitly, layers of depth to start. Sentence "When the window Liu," Jennifer came in the women's apartment thinking, plays with the "flutter to spend," write the relay trip trying to come up. These two lines through the image of the teaser, thinking and thinking without saying the word Zhuoran visible. Three forward layer, wrote March 30 that particular time by the deep-seated despair into hope Acacia. But still not as direct, only to "spring to do," the words out of, input subtle essence. Four more advance level, implicitly into the outbreak, direct point of "thinking" words, and thinking again and again with two words, to string together Qian Sanju all together, pointing to the poetic purpose, close up very powerful. As with the original poem poetic style, adopted from Chek retractable flat, but different in the original poem, write it with the sentence, and the antithesis steady work. Straighten not only the beauty of form and expression of enhanced strength. Because, in content, these two are held both Gai, with the right sentence, then see the same deep and sincere feelings of both, think the same touching, form and content of harmony with each other. Also, because the bulk of income from, the rules have changes in the strict, it increased the feeling of the beauty of sound poetry.
(Lai Han Ping)
【Collections】柳树【Source】 卷437_58
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