ancient style poetry
War south
战城南
Li Bai
Last war, Sang dry source; this war, onion river.
Article soldiers supporting the sea waves wash, put the horse Tianshan snow grass.
Thousands of miles long war, and armed forces to make aging.
Huns to kill as farming, since ancient times only see bones Huang Sha Tin.
Qin Hu Department to avoid the fortification, there is war then the Han family.
However, endless war, no battle has been time.
Field fighting death, lost to the days of Ma Ming No. sad.
Black kite pecked human intestinal, deadwood hanging fly title.
Shizu Tu wilderness, the generals Seoul is empty.
I realized that soldiers who are weapons, Saints used a last resort.
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This poem is a criticism of feudal rulers militaristic. Shi Xiao Yun, said: "New Century, Tempo in, having a good side of power, not conquest, the poem is also covered with ridicule." The commentary is quite misses the mark.
Tian, the Emperor light stirred up, and Cheng Wei remote, but after several failures, brought grave disaster to the people. One of these grim facts, the convergence to the poet chest, his obsession with the feelings of the people of Benjamin, have intense conflicts. He thought, anger, pouring out the cries of the heart, cast the famous article.
The whole poem can be roughly divided into three sections and a conclusion.
A total of eight first paragraph, beginning with conquest of the frequent and far-reaching aspects of pen to paper. Write four sentences of the frequent conquest. Sentence of two _set_s of symmetry there, not only phonological sonorous, and the overlapping lines Repetitive and distinctive on the move, giving the east Zhengxi discussion, turn the strong impression that pennant endless, eloquent expression of the theme. "Wash" soldiers of two far-written sign the line. Zuo Si, "Wei Dufu" Description Cao discussion off the pack, Megatron Universe's momentum, said: "Soldiers island wash, brush Majiang Zhou." The two with the meaning. Washing soldiers, wash away the filth on the weapons; release of horses, pasture horses, soldiers in the article support the sea to wash the Tianshan grass Wrangler, the levy line of far-reaching from view. Frequently attacked by the war to sign the line into the far-reaching, state expanded, the content is more profound, and is a good layout of Dianran the ink. "Miles," two is the conclusion of this paragraph. "Thousands of miles long campaign" is the conquest of frequent and far-reaching conclusion, "the three services to make aging" is the inevitable result of long expedition, the majority of soldiers in unnecessary wars exhausted Love and Zhuang Sheng youth energy. With the previous description, this soon lament ripe, natural sound, without any hypocritical show of feeling bawl clamor.
"Field" as the third paragraph of the following six focus from war to expose the cruelty of an unjust war against evil. "Field" two focused on outlining the desolate atmosphere of the battlefield, "Wu Iris" two focused on describing the miserable picture of the battlefield, the two reflect each other hair, woven into a strong color screen. I still keep a sense of independence, lack of horses, to think the main Ming No more reinforcements sorrows in the death of people; Ukraine pecking order of human intestinal still insufficient, but also to the title hanging branches, even more out of the atrocious scene, all with exaggerated thick color ink. "Shizu" two to lament the end of the paragraph. His soldiers were unnecessary sacrifice, the generals do? Can only be nothing.
"Tragic Hero", said: "No soldier saints for the weapon they had to use it." The poem concludes with this semantics, pointing to the topic. The definite answer is reasonable scope of the phrase, rather than the description of the image. Improper use, prone to abstraction of the disadvantages. Different here. With the specific description of the first three paragraphs, the definite answer from the painful experience of history and reality extracted, there are the finishing touch of magic to make wishes of the poem suddenly. It was suspected that strayed into the body of the sentence annotation language, can be prepared one that actually is not inevitable.
This is a narrative poem, but with a strong lyric, and love are woven into one thing. Three paragraphs at the end of each two exclamation for the end, each section is a natural narrative paragraph is a natural emotional ups and downs melody. Things and the situation with so harmonious, so that the poem has a distinct sense of rhythm, there is "a singing three sighed," in essence.
(Sun Jing)【Source】 卷162_7
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