Sitting alone: alone on a make.
Without it: frustration, that their loved ones can not eliminate the worry.
"Joining the Army," Poems are written by Wang Changling Old Frontier by Yue, a total of seven. The first, characterize the pro-border Shuzu think the deep and sincere feelings of nostalgia.
This poem, concise strokes Fuyun Italy, the wording is quite distinctive. Poet skillfully handled the relationship between narrative and lyric. Qian Sanju narrative, describing the environment, using layers of depth, again rendering techniques to create atmosphere and pave the way for the fourth sentence lyrical, lyrical sentences highlight the status of the police pulling lyrical sentence is particularly strong. "War Story", and it would point to understand that this is the observation deck on the west of Qinghai war. Desolate wilderness, look around in boundless, and only this hundred feet tall, this environment can easily lead to people's sense of loneliness. Coincided with the fall season, Liang Qi invaded, it is from home their loved ones, think women read much of the season. Time has stimulated the evening, "chicken habitat in Shí, day evening men, Yangniu down. Gentleman in the reserve, Ruzhi He do not think!" ("Book of Songs Wang Fengjun child in the Battle"), often triggered by people such time relatives of missing out in Army. At a time, long time no return of symptoms garrison who just "sitting alone" in the isolated garrison upstairs. World long, not even prison down, their loved ones are feeling the direction of Qinghai Lake with the autumn wind blowing in bursts of any churn. Described above, are seen through the visual environment, no sound, but also the lack of three-dimensional. Then the poet wrote: "watching the mountains even more blown bamboo flute." In the solitude of the environment, there was a siren bursts Wuwuyanyan, as relatives are calling, but also as a wandering sigh. This plume of flute, looking like a fuse, so Frontier hiring suppressed feelings in the hearts of their loved ones, could not restrain, and finally to a big outbreak, leads to the last sentence of the poem. This ray of flute, for "sitting alone" above the floor in the solitary man heard flute is King, but King has played the flute full of people express the feeling, make the environment more specifically, the content is more enriched. This situation is also a poet with King's sentence, without a trace, and completed the transition from the scene transition into the situation, how smart, how natural!
Thinking of hiring in the performance of activities, the poet turns brush is also very tactful. Ambience has been created for the lyrical paved pad stability and a matter of course, directly describe the psychological edge - "no worry that Kim Gui Wan." On the performance of the levy to be people miss their loved ones, feelings of nostalgia for their homeland, but does not directly write, partial Chouhuai miles from his wife's purdah reflected. The actual situation is also true: the wife can not eliminate the thoughts, it is another sign of people think of returning home may not return results. This writing technique, the thinking woman's feelings and symptoms completely blend together. To the whole chapter, this one as the finishing touch, immediately soar to charm the poem, and the power of the more moving.
(Zhang Yanjin)
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