Snow Burning

[白水]

Snow Burning

“Snow burning, snow burning”
wind whispers.
but I could not find,
where are the fire?

“Snow burning, snow burning”
wind blows.
I close my eyes,
but could not feel,
the smoke and the warmth.

“Snow burning, snow burning”
the wind cries.
I look around,
ashes cover ashes,
lay down on the land,
and I hearing that
a bird singing on a tree:

“Snow burning,
the snow burning.”

[kino]

Snow Burning
雪在燃烧

“Snow burning, snow burning”
wind whispers.
but I could not find,
where are the fire?
“雪在燃烧，雪在燃烧”
风轻轻地说
但是我却看不到
火在哪里？

“Snow burning, snow burning”
wind blows.
I close my eyes,
but could not feel,
the smoke and the warmth.
“雪在燃烧，雪在燃烧”
风掠过
我闭上眼睛
却不能感觉
那烟和温暖

“Snow burning, snow burning”
the wind cries.
I look around,
ashes cover ashes,
lay down on the land,
and I hearing that
a bird singing on a tree:
“雪在燃烧，雪在燃烧”
风呼号着
我环顾四周
灰烬成堆
躺在这片大地上
我听到
鸟儿在枝头吟唱


“Snow burning,
the snow burning.”
“雪儿在燃烧，
那雪在燃烧”。

边读边译~~~

[白水]

谢谢你, 我懒了一下, 没译成中文.

[kino]

[Lake]

Kino 快手快脚。

改语法错误比改诗容易。像这两句：

[白水]

lake, thanks a lot. i will think it carefuly, after i complete my homework

[William Zhou周道模]

i like to read the poem aloud!

"lay down on the land"---- on the ground ?
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模