（１）本调九十三字，十八句，前片四仄韵，后片五仄韵。姜夔改叶平韵，声情俱变，从者甚少，此处不录。
（２）第三第四句为四字两句，前加三字豆。五、六两句，宜用对偶。第七句八字，句法上三下五，实即平起平收之七字句上加一豆，所以语气可不停顿。第八句三字，用平平仄，已成定格。后片起四句，均三字仄句，第二、四句叶韵分作两排，各自对偶。为了避免呆滞，可以改为以上二句对下二句。第五、六句均四字，上加一豆。
（３）本调从苏轼开始多抒豪放之情，故一向以声情激越称著，岳飞词就是一例。作者写词时年已三十，却把自己已建立的功名看作象尘土一般微不足道。还我河山，直捣八千里外的金邦老巢--黄龙府，才是自己的志愿。站得高，看得远，意境才能开阔。“三十功名”两句不仅内容好，对仗也很工，音节也很响亮。后片“壮志”一联，说我怀着雄心壮志，象饥饿要觅食似地饱餐敌人的肉；我谈笑自如象口渴了要喝水似地痛饮敌人的血。它表现了作者对敌人刻骨仇恨，压倒敌人的英雄气概，没有强烈的爱国主义精神是写不出来的。此外，“白了少年头”的“白”字，“踏破贺兰山缺”的“破”字，都用得十分生动有力，从炼字上也可以得到启发。有人认为此词的忠君思想比较严重。我们认为这首词尽管有忠君思想，但表现了恢复中原的不可动摇的意志，是符合人民利益的，是一首爱国主义的杰作。
(1) The transfer 90 words, 18, before the film four Zeyun, after the film five Zeyun. Ye Ping Yun Jiang Kui change, sound and feeling club, and from those few, not recorded here.
(2) the third and fourth sentence of two to four characters, preceded by the words beans. 5, 62, it is appropriate duality. Seventh sentence of eight characters, syntax, with three under five, which equals real income of the seven words add a bean, so voice from time to pause. Eighth sentence of words, with a flat tone, has become a fixed grid. After the film from the four, all the words ze sentence, the second, 4 Yun divided into two rows, each of the dual. In order to avoid dull, can be changed under the above two pairs of two. Fifth, six were four words, add a bean.
(3) The tone from the beginning and more Sushi express uninhibited feelings, it has always been intense, said the sound and feeling, the word Yue Fei is one example. Author wrote the lyrics when he was already 30, yet his fame has been established as a general insignificant as dust. I also mountains and rivers, destroy 8,000 miles away GeIL nest - Yellow Dragon House, is his ambition. Looks far to open mood. "30 fame," 2 was not only good, antithesis is also working, very loud syllable. After the film "aspirations," a joint that I harbored ambitions, like hunger, adding that meal to feed the enemy's flesh; I talk and laugh freely like a thirsty to drink the blood of the enemy wildly swig. It showed the deep-seated hatred of the enemy, overwhelm the enemy's heroic spirit, no strong patriotic spirit could not write to the. In addition, the "white young head" and "white" character, "You can wear out lack of Helan Mountain," the "broken", which are very lively with a powerful word from the refining can be inspired. Some people think the word loyalty more serious thought. We believe that poem despite ideological loyalty, but the performance of the restoration of the unshakable will of the Central Plains is in the people's interests, is a patriotic masterpiece.
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