（１）本調九十三字，十八句，前片四仄韻，片五仄韻。姜夔改葉平韻，聲情俱變，從者甚少，此處不錄。
（２）第三第四句為四字兩句，前加三字豆。五、六兩句，宜用對偶。第七句八字，句法上三下五，實即平起平收之七字句上加一豆，所以語氣可不停頓。第八句三字，用平平仄，已成定格。片起四句，均三字仄句，第二、四句葉韻分作兩排，各自對偶。為避免呆滯，可以改為以上二句對下二句。第五、六句均四字，上加一豆。
（３）本調從軾開始多抒豪放之情，故一以聲情激越稱著，嶽飛詞就是一例。作者寫詞時年已三十，卻把自己已建立的功名看作象塵土一般微不足道。還我河山，直搗八鄰里里程外的金邦老巢--黃竜府，是自己的志。站得高，看得遠，意境才能開闊。“三十功名”兩句不僅內容好，對仗也很工，音節也很響亮。片“壯志”一聯，說我懷着雄心壯志，象饑餓要覓食似地飽餐敵人的肉；我談笑自如象口渴要喝水似地痛飲敵人的血。它現作者對敵人刻骨仇恨，壓倒敵人的英雄氣概，沒有強烈的愛國主義精神是寫不出來的。此外，“白少年頭”的“白”字，“踏破賀蘭山缺”的“破”字，都用得十分生動有力，從煉字上也可以得到啓。有人認為此詞的忠君思想比較嚴重。我們認為這首詞儘管有忠君思想，但現恢中原的不可動搖的意志，是符人民利益的，是一首愛國主義的傑作。
(1) The transfer 90 words, 18, before the film four Zeyun, after the film five Zeyun. Ye Ping Yun Jiang Kui change, sound and feeling club, and from those few, not recorded here.
(2) the third and fourth sentence of two to four characters, preceded by the words beans. 5, 62, it is appropriate duality. Seventh sentence of eight characters, syntax, with three under five, which equals real income of the seven words add a bean, so voice from time to pause. Eighth sentence of words, with a flat tone, has become a fixed grid. After the film from the four, all the words ze sentence, the second, 4 Yun divided into two rows, each of the dual. In order to avoid dull, can be changed under the above two pairs of two. Fifth, six were four words, add a bean.
(3) The tone from the beginning and more Sushi express uninhibited feelings, it has always been intense, said the sound and feeling, the word Yue Fei is one example. Author wrote the lyrics when he was already 30, yet his fame has been established as a general insignificant as dust. I also mountains and rivers, destroy 8,000 miles away GeIL nest - Yellow Dragon House, is his ambition. Looks far to open mood. "30 fame," 2 was not only good, antithesis is also working, very loud syllable. After the film "aspirations," a joint that I harbored ambitions, like hunger, adding that meal to feed the enemy's flesh; I talk and laugh freely like a thirsty to drink the blood of the enemy wildly swig. It showed the deep-seated hatred of the enemy, overwhelm the enemy's heroic spirit, no strong patriotic spirit could not write to the. In addition, the "white young head" and "white" character, "You can wear out lack of Helan Mountain," the "broken", which are very lively with a powerful word from the refining can be inspired. Some people think the word loyalty more serious thought. We believe that poem despite ideological loyalty, but the performance of the restoration of the unshakable will of the Central Plains is in the people's interests, is a patriotic masterpiece.
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