（ １） běn diào jiǔ shí sān zì， shí bā jù， qián piàn sì zè yùn， hòu piàn wǔ zè yùn。 jiāng kuí gǎi yè píng yùn， shēng qíng jù biàn， cóng zhě shèn shǎo， cǐ chù bù lù。
（ ２） dì sān dì sì jù wéi sì zì liǎng jù， qián jiā sān zì dòu。 wǔ、 liù liǎng jù， yí yòng duì 'ǒu。 dì qī jù bā zì， jù fǎ shàng sān xià wǔ， shí jí píng qǐ píng shōu zhī qī zì jù shàng jiā yī dòu， suǒ yǐ yǔ qì kě bù tíng dùn。 dì bā jù sān zì， yòng píng píng zè， yǐ chéng dìng gé。 hòu piàn qǐ sì jù， jūn sān zì zè jù， dì 'èr、 sì jù xiéyùn fēn zuò liǎng pái， gè zì duì 'ǒu。 wèile bì miǎn dāi zhì， kě yǐ gǎi wéi yǐ shàng 'èr jù duì xià 'èr jù。 dì wǔ、 liù jù jūn sì zì， shàng jiā yī dòu。
（ ３） běn diào cóng sū shì kāi shǐ duō shū háo fàng zhī qíng， gù yī xiàng yǐ shēng qíng jī yuè chēng zhù， yuè fēi cí jiù shì yī lì。 zuò zhě xiě cí shí nián yǐ sān shí， què bǎ zì jǐ yǐ jiàn lì de gōng míng kàn zuò xiàng chén tǔ yī bān wēi bù zú dào。 hái wǒ hé shān， zhí dǎo bā qiān lǐ wài de jīn bāng lǎo cháo -- huáng lóng fǔ， cái shì zì jǐ de zhì yuàn。 zhàn dé gāo， kàn dé yuǎn， yì jìng cái néng kāi kuò。 “ sān shí gōng míng ” liǎng jù bù jǐn nèi róng hǎo， duì zhàng yě hěn gōng， yīn jié yě hěn xiǎng liàng。 hòu piàn“ zhuàng zhì” yī lián， shuō wǒ huái zhe xióng xīn zhuàng zhì， xiàng jī 'è yào mì shí sì dì bǎo cān dí rén de ròu； wǒ tán xiào zì rú xiàng kǒu kě liǎo yào hē shuǐ sì dì tòng yǐn dí rén de xuè。 tā biǎo xiàn liǎo zuò zhě duì dí rén kè gǔ chóu hèn， yā dǎo dí rén de yīng xióng qì gài， méi yòu qiáng liè de 'ài guó zhù yì jīng shén shì xiě bù chū lái de。 cǐ wài，“ bái liǎo shàonián tóu” de“ bái” zì，“ tà pò hè lán shān quē” de“ pò” zì， dū yòng dé shí fēn shēng dòng yòu lì， cóng liàn zì shàng yě kě yǐ dé dào qǐ fā。 yòu rén rèn wéi cǐ cí de zhōng jūn sī xiǎng bǐ jiào yán zhòng。 wǒ men rèn wéi zhè shǒu cí jìn guǎn yòu zhōng jūn sī xiǎng， dàn biǎo xiàn liǎo huī fù zhōng yuán de bù kě dòng yáo de yì zhì， shì fú hé rén mín lì yì de， shì yī shǒu 'ài guó zhù yì de jié zuò。
(1) The transfer 90 words, 18, before the film four Zeyun, after the film five Zeyun. Ye Ping Yun Jiang Kui change, sound and feeling club, and from those few, not recorded here.
(2) the third and fourth sentence of two to four characters, preceded by the words beans. 5, 62, it is appropriate duality. Seventh sentence of eight characters, syntax, with three under five, which equals real income of the seven words add a bean, so voice from time to pause. Eighth sentence of words, with a flat tone, has become a fixed grid. After the film from the four, all the words ze sentence, the second, 4 Yun divided into two rows, each of the dual. In order to avoid dull, can be changed under the above two pairs of two. Fifth, six were four words, add a bean.
(3) The tone from the beginning and more Sushi express uninhibited feelings, it has always been intense, said the sound and feeling, the word Yue Fei is one example. Author wrote the lyrics when he was already 30, yet his fame has been established as a general insignificant as dust. I also mountains and rivers, destroy 8,000 miles away GeIL nest - Yellow Dragon House, is his ambition. Looks far to open mood. "30 fame," 2 was not only good, antithesis is also working, very loud syllable. After the film "aspirations," a joint that I harbored ambitions, like hunger, adding that meal to feed the enemy's flesh; I talk and laugh freely like a thirsty to drink the blood of the enemy wildly swig. It showed the deep-seated hatred of the enemy, overwhelm the enemy's heroic spirit, no strong patriotic spirit could not write to the. In addition, the "white young head" and "white" character, "You can wear out lack of Helan Mountain," the "broken", which are very lively with a powerful word from the refining can be inspired. Some people think the word loyalty more serious thought. We believe that poem despite ideological loyalty, but the performance of the restoration of the unshakable will of the Central Plains is in the people's interests, is a patriotic masterpiece.
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