（１）本调五十字，八句，前后片各两平韵，结句各叶一仄韵，例须同部，见本书附录词韵。
（２）起二句为六字对，亦有不对偶者，以对偶为佳。第四句六字，换用词部仄叶。后片字句句法，均同前片。
（３）例词为辛词名作之一。这是一首以农村为题材的词，时令在炎夏的夜里。那时作者退隐在江西上饶带湖，风景幽美的黄沙道就在附近。因为是一首小词，所以选用了一晴一雨两个小场景。前片写晴，开头两句是对仗，上句写树上的乌鹊因月光明亮而惊飞不定，从这一枝跳到另一枝。有一种意见把“别”解作动词，说“别枝”是离开枝头之意，这种说法似欠通顺，且与下句的“半夜”不成对，不可取。下句说蝉在清风吹拂的半夜还在鸣叫（说明天气炎热）。不过，天气虽热，却是风调雨顺，“稻花香里说丰年”表明，稻子正扬花，一片芳香，丰收在望，词人内心异常高兴，而要称赞一番。但是，词人在这句后面紧跟一句“听取蛙声一片”，借一片蛙鼓之声来歌唱丰年，进一步表达了人们心头的喜悦。这种写法，即所谓侧面烘托，比直来直去的效果自然要好得多。后片写雨。夏夜的雨不同于“随风潜入夜”的绵绵春雨，而是变化倏忽，来去无定的阵雨。刚才不是明月在天，树梢鸣蝉吗？一会儿，天空被乌云遮蔽，天边只剩下七八个星星了，大有山雨欲来之意。果然，在山前，已经淅淅沥沥地飘下了“两三点雨”。这时，词人当然不能再象原来那样从从容容，而要赶快找个地方避雨了。他自然想起了过去附近土地庙树林旁边有爿茅店，于是他急急忙忙地跑过小溪的桥，再拐个弯，抬头一看，那爿茅店忽然在“社林边”出现了。
这首词总共不过五十个字，但内涵却很丰富，前片表现那种丰收的喜悦，后片写茅店的突现眼前，无不生动灵活，跃然纸上，真可说达到了声情并茂的境地。写作上的这些特点，需要仔细玩味，深入体会。
(1) The transfer 50 words, 8, before and after the film the two Ping Yun, each leaf node of a Zeyun sentence, patients have the same department, see appendix words rhyme book.
(2) from two for the sixth pair, who have not even to the dual is better. The fourth sentence of the sixth, for the Department of narrow leaf terms. Words after the film syntax, all with the former film.
(3) The case of one word for the Xin word masterpiece. This is a rural theme of the word, the night in the hot summer season. Withdrawal time of Shangrao in Jiangxi Province, with lakes, beautiful scenery of the sand will be found in the vicinity. Because it is a small word, so use a clear shower of rain in two small scenes. Before the film was clear, first two sentences of antithesis, the sentence was a result of the tree Ukrainian Magpie flush bright moonlight uncertain, jump from one branch to another. There is a view of "other" interpreted as a verb, say "Do not sticks," meaning to leave the branches, this argument seems less fluent, and the next sentence with "middle of the night," not a right, not desirable. Cicada in the next sentence says the middle of the night breeze is still tweet (note the hot weather). However, although the hot weather, but it is good weather, "said Rice harvest floral," shows that rice is flowering, a fragrance, a bumper harvest, the word of one's inner pleased to learn, but to praise something. However, word in sentence is followed by a "listen to the frogs a" frog drum, by a voice to sing the harvest, and further expressed the people's hearts with joy. The wording of the so-called indirect foil, than straight to the natural effect is much better. After the film was the rain. Summer rain is different from "sneaked into the night wind," the rain rain, but a change in mortal, come and go without shower set. Just not the moon in the day, trees landscape is it? While, the clouds obscured the sky, the sky only 78 stars, and a great atmosphere of meaning. Sure enough, in the Piedmont, has been floating down the rhythm to "two or three in the rain." At this time, word of course can not be as leisurely as the original, and to quickly find a place to shelter the. He naturally thought of the woods next to the last near the Earth Temple Pán thatch, and he hurried to the bridge the stream ran, and then Guaige Wan, looked up and suddenly it Pán thatch in the "community forest edge," there .
Poem, but a total of 50 characters, but the content is very rich in the kind of pre-film performance of the joy of harvest, after the film was the emergence thatch eyes, are all vivid, vivid and colorful, has arguably reached a Attractively position. Writing on these features, and requires careful pondering, in-depth experience.
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