（１）本調五十字，八句，前片各兩平韻，結句各葉一仄韻，例同部，見本書附錄詞韻。
（２）起二句為六字對，亦有不對偶者，以對偶為佳。第四句六字，換用詞部仄葉。片字句句法，均同前片。
（３）例詞為辛詞名作之一。這是一首以農村為題材的詞，時令在炎夏的夜。那時作者退隱在江西上饒帶湖，風景幽美的黃沙道就在附近。因為是一首小詞，所以選用一晴一雨兩個小場景。前片寫晴，開頭兩句是對仗，上句寫樹上的烏鵲因月光明亮而驚飛不定，從這一枝跳到另一枝。有一種意見把“”解作動詞，說“枝”是離開枝頭之意，這說法似欠通順，且與下句的“半夜”不成對，不可取。下句說蟬在清風吹拂的半夜還在鳴叫（說明天氣炎熱）。不過，天氣雖熱，卻是風調雨順，“稻花香說年”明，稻子正揚花，一片芳香，收在望，詞人內心異常高興，而要稱贊一番。但是，詞人在這句後面緊跟一句“聽取蛙聲一片”，一片蛙鼓之聲來歌唱年，進一步達人們心頭的喜悅。這寫法，即所謂側烘托，比直來直去的效果自然要好得多。片寫雨。夏夜的雨不同於“隨風潛入夜”的綿綿春雨，而是變化倏忽，來去無定的陣雨。剛纔不是明月在天，樹梢鳴蟬嗎？一會兒，天空被烏遮蔽，天邊剩下七八個星星，大有山雨欲來之意。果然，在山前，已經淅淅瀝瀝地飄下“兩三點雨”。這時，詞人當然不能再象原來那樣從從容容，而要趕快找個地方避雨。他自然想起過去附近土地廟樹林旁邊有爿茅店，於是他急急忙忙地跑過小溪的橋，再拐個彎，擡頭一看，那爿茅店忽然在“社林邊”出現。
這首詞總共不過五十個字，但內涵卻很豐富，前片現那丰采收的喜悅，片寫茅店的突現眼前，無不生動靈活，躍然紙上，真可說達到聲情並茂的境地。寫作上的這些特點，需要仔細玩味，深入會。
(1) The transfer 50 words, 8, before and after the film the two Ping Yun, each leaf node of a Zeyun sentence, patients have the same department, see appendix words rhyme book.
(2) from two for the sixth pair, who have not even to the dual is better. The fourth sentence of the sixth, for the Department of narrow leaf terms. Words after the film syntax, all with the former film.
(3) The case of one word for the Xin word masterpiece. This is a rural theme of the word, the night in the hot summer season. Withdrawal time of Shangrao in Jiangxi Province, with lakes, beautiful scenery of the sand will be found in the vicinity. Because it is a small word, so use a clear shower of rain in two small scenes. Before the film was clear, first two sentences of antithesis, the sentence was a result of the tree Ukrainian Magpie flush bright moonlight uncertain, jump from one branch to another. There is a view of "other" interpreted as a verb, say "Do not sticks," meaning to leave the branches, this argument seems less fluent, and the next sentence with "middle of the night," not a right, not desirable. Cicada in the next sentence says the middle of the night breeze is still tweet (note the hot weather). However, although the hot weather, but it is good weather, "said Rice harvest floral," shows that rice is flowering, a fragrance, a bumper harvest, the word of one's inner pleased to learn, but to praise something. However, word in sentence is followed by a "listen to the frogs a" frog drum, by a voice to sing the harvest, and further expressed the people's hearts with joy. The wording of the so-called indirect foil, than straight to the natural effect is much better. After the film was the rain. Summer rain is different from "sneaked into the night wind," the rain rain, but a change in mortal, come and go without shower set. Just not the moon in the day, trees landscape is it? While, the clouds obscured the sky, the sky only 78 stars, and a great atmosphere of meaning. Sure enough, in the Piedmont, has been floating down the rhythm to "two or three in the rain." At this time, word of course can not be as leisurely as the original, and to quickly find a place to shelter the. He naturally thought of the woods next to the last near the Earth Temple Pán thatch, and he hurried to the bridge the stream ran, and then Guaige Wan, looked up and suddenly it Pán thatch in the "community forest edge," there .
Poem, but a total of 50 characters, but the content is very rich in the kind of pre-film performance of the joy of harvest, after the film was the emergence thatch eyes, are all vivid, vivid and colorful, has arguably reached a Attractively position. Writing on these features, and requires careful pondering, in-depth experience.
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