Yin wrote a lot of chanting poems, not only the physical things work cut, depict nuanced, but also through the various characterizations of images to convey the inherent charm. Here give two similar works in that subject compared.
Chant before a light rain. Light is not easy to detect, how can it truly shown it? Poem describing the whole virtual office to put pen to paper, by means of the relevant things and people around the subjective feelings in various ways as a foil, rendering, capture the image of light rain. Write two sentences before and after the beginning of the evening light rain began falling near the scene. Margaret and mist. Little, gradually. Light rain early, only feel it together with the mist floating in the forest, there is fog or rain Bianbu Qing; gradually, with the same night, it got the evening coolness points. After two years to write off the middle of the night scene after the light rain. Distant, far away. Empty, empty. Light years behind the temperature dropped, people sit inside the house, although separated by the window, and still felt a chill through the home, the intrusion into just the lights flickering on; the same time, the air long after the tide was falling, rain can not help but gain weight in the empty courtyard, near the surface can hear the sound coming from tiny pattering. Four-line poem written the night from dusk to play between the light rain falling from the beginning of a long process, first completely difficult to detect, and then gradually to detect, written very delicate and ironing, but not a word to describe the light rain itself directly only from the forest Margaret, cool night, lights, sound of water all the images to reflect the light rain to bring people of various feelings, showing the tilting of the Handicraft ecstatic scenery ability. The following words are also very appropriate, "the beginning with," "a little common," "invasion," "cold", "false", "near", always withhold the characteristics of light rain, meticulous.
If you say, "Light," the beauty of writing is to avoid the rain spread from the front, the shape, just by the side of people's feelings as a contrast, then the "rain" of the pen to write rules Shop all be positive, but played a metaphor and the function of imagination, the same write flexible and fresh.
Psalm beat up two example. INTERACTIVE refers to Temple, according to legend died in the Tang Dynasty, Li, I saw angels in heaven that he is called God Emperor transfer to the new record Baiyu Lou written text. Bi gums, metaphor refers to the sky, as if with a blue sky clarity Bise into the bed of ivory sculpture. There will be floating down the rain from heaven, imagination is flowing like a temple INTERACTIVE drooping before the curtain, and Xiang Shicong gum on the sky this FOOTPRINTS I rolled down the bamboo mat. Curtain, bamboo mat seats are fine textured and light, soft texture of objects, use them as a match, not only reflect the dense rain caused by the shape, but also painted the rain with the wind drift of the ethereal gesture. Next, borrowing myths and legends of material for further description. Chu F, means "little Siming Nine Songs" in the description of the goddess, she wrote that poem after bath exposure Tianchi, combing their hair look. Rustling, cool feeling. Said here: imagine goddess was the Italian state, and that thick hair brushed down from the two Jianpi, flash their gleaming luster, the rustling deliver cool, not to the phase with the front of the rain spilled like it? This analogy is not only more vivid to write a drizzle of the characteristics of various items, but also particularly rich in charm, cute reverie. Lenovo whole poem is rich in artistic mood, such as "Gone with the Wind curtain", "bamboo mat volume" of the specific image of "white", "Bi teeth", "hair color" in contrast and color, "Xiao Xiao" cool atmosphere, especially Goddess Italian state to a virtual copy synthesized a deceitful illusion magic, colorful screen. In comparison, "light rain" biased realistic style, this poem is more touching, romantic, from reflecting the diversity of style chanting.
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