| 西方文学 Western Literature |
 
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 Short Poems (21-30)
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another autumn
hangs heavy with red apples
cicada choir fades
22
what joy this is
fireworks bloom in the night sky
beauty of ksana
23
true value？
that’s like a hard nut to crack
one of those questions
24
the global warming
melted icebergs and cold war
fall of Berlin wall
25
the sounds of a soul
float under a glowing pen
birds stop twittering
26
on empty fields
wanders an empty soul
to the emptiness
27
leaving past behind
the spirit moves on
sunrise on horizon
28
to the mosquito
smiles a fat and grey spider
“welcome to my web!”
29
it’s best to glance down
the mortal world rolling on
a fond dream shattered
30
a decent haiku?
5-7-5 not a must
an ah ha! moment
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2007-07-25 08:58:16 |
| kokho ?2007-07-29 13:46:12?? |  |
what joy this is
fireworks bloom in the night sky
beauty of ksana
好 ！！！
a decent haiku?
5-7-5 not a must
an ah ha! moment
高！！！
it’s best to glance down
the mortal world rolling on
a fond dream shattered
还在品味 ｌａｋｅ 提升了很多 ；））
another autumn
hangs heavy with red apples
cicada choir fades
回眸才看到的精彩 ！！！
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| Lake ?2007-07-30 10:26:27?? | |
谢谢Kokho点评。和你的精品相比，差远着去了。
“Ksana" 从你那偷学来的，总算找到机会运用一下。
an ah ha! moment
leads to a ha ha! moment
what an enlightenment!
我这些写得很杂，没有分类，碰到什么就写什么，贻笑大方了。
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| kokho ?2007-07-30 21:55:51?? | |
所有的好诗，都是这样的开始 ！！！
据说100首有成，300首成家。。。
你可以经 有女儿了 ：））
。。
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2007-07-30 22:18:52?? | |
very good! I've read them and learned something from them. I will read
them later.Thank you, Lake!
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