冰花
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 Posted: 2013-02-28 11:26:34 Post subject: [双语诗歌]一个女孩 |
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一个女孩
冰花
一个女孩
用玫瑰编织着花环
你如一米阳光
沐吻了这花环
你又离开了
留下了如梦如幻
一个女孩
为一米阳光
拒绝了彩虹的斑斓
一个女孩
情无奈
爱无言
为再见一米阳光
再一次跪在佛前
为寻梦编织着花环
A GIRL
BY ROSE LU (BING HUA)
A girl,
making a wreath with roses
Like a ray of sunshine
you came and kissed the wreath
then departed
leaving behind a fantasy
A girl,
for a ray of sunshine,
dismisses the colorful rainbow
To see once again a ray of sunshine
A girl,
kneeling before God
starts to make another wreath
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| Posted: 2013-02-28 11:57:44 Post subject: |
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很浪漫哦
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| Posted: 2013-02-28 11:58:12 Post subject: |
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| 问好冰花，好美丽的花环 |
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| Posted: 2013-03-02 00:26:28 Post subject: |
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sweet.
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再一次跪在佛前
kneeling before God |
"佛" 译为 "Buddha"不好吗？
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| Posted: 2013-03-22 05:36:16 Post subject: |
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enjoying it.thanks!
you? she? better?
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| Posted: 2013-03-26 13:38:53 Post subject: |
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女孩子有时很傻，傻得可爱。。
看到冰花二字便想起歌曲《鲁冰花》， 原来还真是鲁冰花。。 |
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冰花
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| Posted: 2014-02-17 04:23:01 Post subject: |
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又一版本： A Girl
BY BING HUA （ＲＯＳＥ ＬＵ）
A girl
Made a garland with roses
You were like a meter of sunlight
bathed the garland with kisses
And left
Leaving a dream behind.
A girl
Refused the gorgeous rainbows
For a meter of sunlight
A girl
Longing, helplessly
and pining silently
For another meeting with the meter of sunlight
She knees once again before Buddha
Making a garland for seeking that dream.
Tr. East Sea Fairy
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what a lovely girl ! best wish to her !
偶个人觉得，god，并不是上帝的意思，而是-神明，可以用来代表所有的宗教的神，希腊的，或者基督教的，或者佛教的；不过，多数人会觉得那是基督教的上帝，是西方的东西，代表西方文化；而，佛，则是东方的、亚洲的，代表的是东方的文化；所以，这是翻译者个人的宗教选择的事情了，若那个女孩是相信佛教的，那就最好翻译成Buddha，因为在佛教里，还有个前世来世的轮回一说，就可以让读者去猜想可能女孩祈祷的和这有关；而若翻译成god，就很含糊了，究竟那代表的是基督教的还是别的，若是基督教，那么生命死后的灵魂去向由上帝裁夺，所以那女孩祈祷的就只能是扎实过好这一生在这辈子继续寻找爱情。所以说，偶以为这不是简单的可以忽略的翻译，生死爱，这是人生和文学、艺术反映的三大主题，所以就绝对不可忽视哦，其他的如何翻译倒反而是无所谓的，我以为。 
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