A poem for Cai Xiang
This poem entitled "ask a guest to stay in the mountains", of course, ask a guest to stay focused on it. However, because this is not ask a guest to stay at home, but "ask a guest to stay in the mountains," the purpose of leaving no doubt enjoy the mountain scenery, so you can not not write the beauty of Spring Hill, but will write more dilute the "ask a guest to stay" theme. Poet how to solve this problem? He took only a positive description of Mountain View, a poem: "The mountains get Chunhui light of state." Because only one, so the poet is not to depict a spring with one stone, flowers and wood, but from the whole start, focus on the performance of the entire face of Spring Hill, weather updates from Vientiane, the rendering life everywhere, spectacular mood. Had to do winter, spring will wear new garments to the bleak forest, everything bathed in the genial sunshine, vibrant radiance glow, Yan Zheng-qi Dou. The "get" the word, they give everything to a harmonious, dynamic modality and charm. "Mountain light of state get Chunhui", written in very general, but not abstract, Shan Kwong you think any of state. Is that you want to drop the new branch green leaves it? Fluttering in the breeze of the mountain flowers are sent bursts of smell it? Mosaic leaves the singing of birds is it? The gurgling brook is always pour it? ... ... All of them include a poem in this sentence. This is a very stimulating and call to action of the poem. Poet, put it in the beginning of the poem also has an original of.
Only this one is written very strong, and the head start to form an overwhelming advantage, "stay" makes sense only guests overshadow concerns. So that at the beginning of the sentence in the performance, the structure is worthy of fine taste. The first sentence contains the rich, great weight, the second sentence, "Do they intend to go negative light", although is no idea of the guests, but look down the river, effortlessly. Yes, the face of this beautiful scenery, how as a cloud on the horizon going home?
Light to persuade guests "Do it to be classified as light shade," is not enough, so that the guests must also be true under the heart, You Xingnong out of it. How can we reach this step? Said no rain today, can be a bolt, not to mention "Light shade" has been see, I'm afraid this is not necessarily the insurance package tickets, guests may not be able to resolve the doubts in mind. Mental guests wondering poet, he is not not appreciate the beauty of Spring Hill, just worry about rain soaked clothes. That being the case, the poet came to a retreat. You are afraid of rain wet clothes up, fine so what? "Seimei no rain even color, into the depths of the cloud also Zhanyi." "Zhanyi" Although it is inevitable, but that the empty mountains, valleys, misty clouds, water vapor misty, dew thick mosaic, ... ... it is also another round of very poetic realm ah! However, this is not far to the side can see. It must climb mountains, explore the valley, the ground, to taste. And fine nozzle that "deep into the cloud," the word, but also provoke the imagination and the pursuit of endless, because "into" the more "deep", which will see more, however, this "non-where there is not to it. " Poetry can be seen three or four two sentences, not just passively lifting the guests concerns, but cleverly tactful way, with that fascinating mood, actively seek to induce, to light the hearts of the guests to enjoy the beauty of Spring Hill fire .
(Zhao Qijun)
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