Dream boat to spend the end of afternoon, West Lake, the water full of fragrant smoke. Pelting rain canopy play sound Partially awakened dream. Pool jumping charge was rain, Scattered pearls still together. Nest together for mercury, Shiba diarrhea.
Xiao Ling This is the first to write lively tone his dream boating lake and the scene after being awakened by the rain. Write woke up showings see scenery, exist side by side with the previous dream. "Is the rain dance pool Netherlands, scattered pearls still together." "Is" word, nexus, strung together the dream and reality. Had previously heard the dream, "pelting rain canopy play sound", looked outside, is the rain falls in the lotus pond in front of the sound. "Jump" words the rain was anxious, and poorly at the "da" echoes. Jump in raindrop on a lotus leaf, pearl-shaped capsules of the same, "beads" was scattered rain click, and re-aggregation, so that "bulk of the ... ... still together", if not carefully observed, it is difficult to extract this the Quotes of the past. "Nest together for mercury, diarrhea ha." "Mercury" word as a metaphor, the image of water drops on the lotus leaves to write aggregation rolling landscape ever. These two is that the rain together more, and accumulation of mercury-like litter, leaves can not afford it at this time the weight of water on the leaves will fall into the pool. "Jump," "casual," "poly," "diarrhea", four verbs, the rain lotus leaf, lotus leaf surface of water droplets roll, again and again the scene is written come to life. The word ingenious, innovative mood, dream and reality were written, the twists and turns and there are many levels, very change, savor, seem to see the splendid crystal pearls on the green "Pan" in the scrolling; seem to smell the flowers bursts of fragrance, has a strong artistic appeal. (Wang Fangjun)