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ZY ?2007-05-23 13:53:48?? Reply with quote


一位醉酒者不小心透露了
一条死鱼的消息，整个世界
便充满了腐烂的气味

*三句话描出凄惨世界.还得有个酒后吐真言的人来说.
问好了.

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nobody ?2007-05-23 14:37:14?? Reply with quote


高人一筹。

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鲁齐 ?2007-05-23 15:36:17?? Reply with quote


半溪明月 wrote:
问好三色堇,学习你的诗歌~


成熟的写作!

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沙漠 ?2007-05-23 16:41:35?? Reply with quote


语言新颖，诗意迷人！

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