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七绝.清明

细雨绵绵扯脚行，
一年一度话清明。
思亲路上多思绪，
泪洒坟前觅旧情。

2008-04-10 16:00:14
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莹雪 ?2008-04-10 16:50:29?? Reply with quote


结句不错。欢迎唐军林！

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黄洋界 ?2008-04-10 17:11:15?? Reply with quote


同感，欢迎新朋友！

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