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詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-03-03 19:58:16 Post subject: Re: 红点亮了白，你说 ...

燕庄生铁 wrote:

红点亮了白，你说
...

这段是偷俚语或是成语，把常用语汇拆开，再随意组合一下尔！
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燕庄生铁
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Posted: 2008-03-03 20:01:34 Post subject: Re: 红点亮了白，你说 ...

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

燕庄生铁 wrote:

红点亮了白，你说
...

这段是偷俚语或是成语，把常用语汇拆开，再随意组合一下尔！

这效果很好，常用语汇由于常用，耳熟能详。拆开组合后就陌生了许多，这样可以消解审美疲劳。

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Posted: 2008-03-03 20:14:19 Post subject: Re: 红点亮了白，你说 ...

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

燕庄生铁 wrote:

红点亮了白，你说
...

这段是偷俚语或是成语，把常用语汇拆开，再随意组合一下尔！

赞一个！此即推陈出新。把陈词滥调中的词汇重新组合一下，就有了新意。今天一天中，学到了一个英文的例子，又学到了一个中文的，有收获。不过道理是懂了，做又做不来，这种并发症状不大好治。
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詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-03-03 21:00:48 Post subject: Re: 红点亮了白，你说 ...

Lake wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

燕庄生铁 wrote:

红点亮了白，你说
...

这段是偷俚语或是成语，把常用语汇拆开，再随意组合一下尔！

赞一个！此即推陈出新。把陈词滥调中的词汇重新组合一下，就有了新意。今天一天中，学到了一个英文的例子，又学到了一个中文的，有收获。不过道理是懂了，做又做不来，这种并发症状不大好治。

哎哟～我这破招式不用学呀！敢用就会，多用就好！
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Posted: 2008-03-03 21:24:35 Post subject:

欣赏和问好诗友，雪本身就是一首诗歌！喜欢你的诗歌！学习了。风延迟了姿势，你说轻缓，悄然立于你的肩膀红点亮了白，你说挥洒，给一段时间尽情赋予大地以颜色，你说美，不局限于局限烙层次于空间，你说时间也有终止的一天羞涩可以组合，你说开启关注从现在 _________________ 廖蕙琳以写悼亡诗而自成一家，一意孤行！

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-03-04 10:35:58 Post subject: Re: 欣赏和问好诗友，雪本身就是一首诗歌！ ...

笑后 wrote:

欣赏和问好诗友，雪本身就是一首诗歌！
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谢谢！笑后！您这ID虽然做了注解，我还是喜欢您本名多些～
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Posted: 2008-03-04 12:20:19 Post subject:

这首很好~~~ 看来想象力更为重要 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-04 14:22:03 Post subject:

噢，原来是被我掐出来的，真对不起，掐疼您了。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

Lake
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Posted: 2008-03-04 20:29:18 Post subject:

test 怎么没有delete的功能了？那就留着吧， test. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-03-04 21:38:54 Post subject:

诗盗这首的引领方向是什么?

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Posted: 2008-03-05 18:16:41 Post subject: 雪语！谁听的懂雪语？雪，有情意还是敌意？

半溪明月 wrote:

诗盗这首的引领方向是什么?

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:17:12 Post subject: Re: 诗盗这首的引领方向是什么?

半溪明月 wrote:

诗盗这首的引领方向是什么?

Nothing~~~It's about nothing~~~ zt

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