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				|  Posted: 2006-12-28 08:17:09    Post subject: <寄语寒山寺> |   |  
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				| <寄语寒山寺> 
 那日
 悬你于颈,背负
 十字, 背负原罪之本
 是夜了
 如刃在心,欲向谁述?
 
 三更疼醒蜂鸣
 挑帘凝目
 窗外西山寒寺, 梵音轻袅
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		| 和平岛 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2006-12-28 09:24:42    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 现代和古典美的结晶 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2006-12-28 10:22:18    Post subject: |   |  
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				| could you find some words in this poem  |  | 
	
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		| 司马策风 举人
 
  
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2006-12-31 08:38:56    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢司马, 新年好 |  | 
	
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-01-01 12:02:20    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 古意新写。。。 
 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-01-02 20:06:48    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | kokho wrote: |  
	  | 古意新写。。。 
 
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 HI, KOK. could you find some words in this poem ?
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		| 和平岛 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-01-02 20:12:22    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 白水 wrote: |  
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	  | kokho wrote: |  
	  | 古意新写。。。 
 
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 HI, KOK. could you find some words in this poem ?
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 什么字
 我咋看不出来呢
 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-01-02 20:18:06    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 和平岛 wrote: |  
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	  | 白水 wrote: |  
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	  | kokho wrote: |  
	  | 古意新写。。。 
 
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 HI, KOK. could you find some words in this poem ?
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 什么字
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 好几个呢? 看出来就有佛性了
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		| hepingdao Site Admin
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-01-02 20:33:36    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 你写诗,真的是用心 字里藏字呀
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				|  Posted: 2007-01-02 20:38:56    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | hepingdao wrote: |  
	  | 你写诗,真的是用心 字里藏字呀
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