白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-28 08:17:09 Post subject: <寄语寒山寺> |
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<寄语寒山寺>
那日
悬你于颈,背负
十字, 背负原罪之本
是夜了
如刃在心,欲向谁述?
三更疼醒蜂鸣
挑帘凝目
窗外西山寒寺, 梵音轻袅
孤独心路 |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-28 09:24:42 Post subject: |
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现代和古典美的结晶
 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-28 10:22:18 Post subject: |
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could you find some words in this poem  |
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司马策风 举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006 Posts: 1211 Location: 温哥华 司马策风Collection |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-31 08:38:56 Post subject: |
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谢谢司马, 新年好 |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-01-01 12:02:20 Post subject: |
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古意新写。。。
 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-01-02 20:06:48 Post subject: |
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kokho wrote: |
古意新写。。。
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HI, KOK. could you find some words in this poem ?  |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2007-01-02 20:12:22 Post subject: |
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白水 wrote: |
kokho wrote: |
古意新写。。。
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HI, KOK. could you find some words in this poem ?  |
什么字
我咋看不出来呢
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-01-02 20:18:06 Post subject: |
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和平岛 wrote: |
白水 wrote: |
kokho wrote: |
古意新写。。。
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HI, KOK. could you find some words in this poem ?  |
什么字
我咋看不出来呢
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好几个呢? 看出来就有佛性了  |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:33:36 Post subject: |
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你写诗,真的是用心
字里藏字呀 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-01-02 20:38:56 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
你写诗,真的是用心
字里藏字呀 |
不是字里藏字, 而是拆字为诗.  |
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