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[原创新诗] 在松潘城边经过屠牛场

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-09-18 14:48:57 Post subject: [原创新诗] 在松潘城边经过屠牛场

请诸君提修改意见。在松潘城边经过屠牛场从古城山崖上的观音寺下来我走背街沿着岷江向上行有人忙碌着生活着做点小生意有人闲聊着忍受着难闻的空气 --- 前面山脚边是个屠宰场人们爱吃牛肉就忍着屠牛场难闻的的气息我看见几十头牦牛在木栏里等待等待着告别等待着接受屠刀的亲吻我在大门外看不清牦牛们的表情不知它们流泪没有不知它们在想啥问题它们在想自由的草原和肥美的花草吗它们在想自己的儿女和儿女的命运吗它们就这样静静地看着放下屠刀的人们用胶管子用岷江河水把地上的血污冲洗场地干净了屠夫的手干净了空气却洗不干净牛们可能想两脚动物的头比我们高些他们有权利牛们就这样静静等待自己的机会去血染历史 2007-7-21于松潘 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2007-09-18 14:54:08 Post subject:

喜欢！问好诗人． _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-09-18 16:49:10 Post subject:

思维想深刻还欠缺了点不如,前面那首写寺庙的

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-18 20:24:23 Post subject:

深入浅出. 不错.

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Posted: 2007-09-19 00:43:35 Post subject:

去黄龙的地方好象看到过松潘这个地名,问好老乡,牦牛肉旅游地卖得太贵了,到是小镇上便宜，但不清楚是不是牦牛肉!

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Posted: 2007-09-19 03:54:48 Post subject:

吃肉,杀生.真是个复杂问题. 本来,狼吃羊,羊吃草----- 可是,我们怎能不吃动物? 少吃? 一边吃一边心疼流泪? 哎--- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-09-19 06:20:53 Post subject:

感谢诸君的赏读！迪拜的确看出了两首诗的差异。明月家住何方？少君：言此旨彼是也！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-09-19 06:21:49 Post subject:

感谢诸君的赏读！迪拜的确看出了两首诗的差异。明月家住何方？少君：言此旨彼是也！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-19 07:41:51 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

感谢诸君的赏读！

迪拜的确看出了两首诗的差异。

明月家住何方？

少君：言此旨彼是也！

绵阳，欢迎老乡来绵阳玩～ Very Happy

jemmy
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Posted: 2007-09-19 14:56:44 Post subject:

喜欢这首 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-09-19 15:50:33 Post subject:

明月出绵阳，照我广汉亮；如访三星堆，沉思对夕阳！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

kokho
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Posted: 2007-09-20 12:27:22 Post subject:

问好：0 好努力的朋友！！！。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-09-20 14:22:30 Post subject:

感谢 kokho 的鼓励和在翻译方面的实际帮助！文学，既是我的事业，也是一种生活方式、生命方式。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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