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粽子的情意

酸风渍衣
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Posted: 2007-06-17 16:49:56 Post subject: 粽子的情意

端午节到了，是民族传统的节日，给自己亲近的人编发一条短信，聊寄节日情思：绿绿的叶，白白的米，你拥着我，我抱着你。红红的火，滚滚的水，热着我，烫着你。香香的我，甜甜的你，我有你的味道，你有我的气息。端午节到了，这是粽子的情意。

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-06-23 02:56:22 Post subject:

端午节到了，这是粽子的情意..................像歌词.

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-06-24 01:40:28 Post subject:

写粽子的生长过程，提炼不够。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

酸风渍衣
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Posted: 2007-06-24 17:16:15 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

端午节到了，
这是粽子的情意..................像歌词.

谢谢您的意见。

这是我编的一条短信，从一个角度来理解粽子的寓意。

酸风渍衣
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Posted: 2007-06-24 17:22:20 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

写粽子的生长过程，提炼不够。

文字出去，就是别人的东西，而不是自己的了，各人有各人的理解。我自己理解我的这个粽子，并不是要写粽子的生长过程，我只是想借粽叶跟糯米的密切关系来表现有情人之间的密不可分、同甘共苦、相互影响。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-07-06 18:27:44 Post subject:

再读酸风渍衣的大作，确有你说之意，且有民歌的语言风格。可能是“粽子”沾染了太多的“文化”，影响了我的阅读。文友直说，仅供参考。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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