非马
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 Posted: 2011-05-02 10:55:25 Post subject: 未干的画 (双语) |
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未干的画
你墨迹未干的那幅
画
我取走了
它让我忆起
某个异国黄昏
我们携手走出的
雨后风景
我的书房光线不足
正需要一面
能观看风景的
窗
A WET PAINTING
I took your painting
not yet dry
it reminded me of the scenery
where we emerged
hand-in-hand
years ago in a faraway land
after a day's rain
my dim study room
needs a window
with a picturesque view
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Lake
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| Posted: 2011-05-02 17:10:04 Post subject: |
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又来赏读非马先生的诗。
富有情趣的小诗， 特别喜欢作者是如何把意象 “一幅画” 在整首诗中 follow through 的。
问好！
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William Zhou周道模
探花
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Location: 中国四川广汉
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| Posted: 2011-05-04 17:42:57 Post subject: |
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第一节叙事，第二节回想抒情，第三节想象凌虚、机趣立意。学习！问好！
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非马
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博弈
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| Posted: 2011-06-03 18:26:17 Post subject: |
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至今未乾, 我感覺. 
我覺得中文部分(相較英文版)
能讀出更多的東西.
先生好!
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