William Zhou周道模
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 Posted: 2011-02-27 16:06:43 Post subject: 【汉英微诗】北京春雪 |
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北京春雪
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三只麻雀在雪被上觅食
两个喜鹊在光枝头吵雪
一位诗人在四合院望春
Spring Snow in Beijing
Three sparrows are seeking food on the snows
Two magpies are bickering about snow on naked brances
One poet is looking up to the Spring in the courtyard
2011-2-26晨 北京林萃书院
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| 三、二、一、四 的配合，妙！ |
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2011-03-01 22:44:59 Post subject: |
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| Rhapsodia wrote: |
| 三、二、一、四 的配合，妙！ |
thank you for your encouraging! good luck to you!
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sticks不妥，給人感覺是砍下來的樹枝。
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同意，还真没注意到。好眼力！ |
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William Zhou周道模
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branches? thanks!
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