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【试译非马】老妇人

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-09-06 14:46:22 Post subject: 【试译非马】老妇人

Old Woman by William Marr Like a worn-out record The deep grooves On her forehead Repeat and repeat I want to live I want to live I want to 老妇人非马作周道模译她额上深深的皱纹像一张老旧的唱片在一遍遍地哀唱我想活！我想活，我想…… 2009-5-8 译 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-10-12 04:22:02 Post subject:

非马老师的诗歌，精巧深刻。我也想翻译他的诗，可就是怕译不好。

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Posted: 2009-10-12 15:09:22 Post subject:

Mr. Zhang, I'd love to read your translation of Mr. Fei Ma's poems. 非马先生的诗短小精悍，用词经济，译起来可能发挥的余地不多(不能有太多的添加成分），我想。还有，非马先生的诗大多都有中、英两个版本，要译，最好译没有中文版的。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2010-02-06 10:57:51 Post subject:

周Sir 真的很了解飛馬, 道行極高,譯出了飛馬心聲. 天衣無縫的合拍希望再有新譯作 _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-02-06 20:17:13 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

Mr. Zhang, I'd love to read your translation of Mr. Fei Ma's poems.
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Yes,you're right. thank Lake for encouraging!
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-02-06 20:19:34 Post subject:

sfiawong wrote:

周Sir 真的很了解飛馬,
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谢谢先生的鼓励！我试译了一组，陆续挂上求教。
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Posted: 2010-02-07 01:03:10 Post subject:

一遍遍地哀唱欣赏译作。。

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Posted: 2010-02-08 19:30:26 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

一遍遍地哀唱

欣赏译作。。

thank you for your enjoying it!
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