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【试译非马诗】对话 Dialogue

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-05-08 15:07:34 Post subject: 【试译非马诗】对话 Dialogue

请非马老师校正： Dialogue By William Marr What are you running away from, old woman? ARMY what kind of army? red army or white army? ARMY What are you hiding from, young mother? BOMBS Where are the bombs from? east or west? BOMBS What are you crying about? little girl? BLOOD Whose blood? human or animal? BLOOD 对话非马作周道模译老大娘，你为啥逃跑？军队啊。哪个军队？红军还是白军？就是军队！年轻的母亲，你为啥躲藏？炸弹啊。哪来的炸弹？东方还是西方？就是炸弹！小姑娘，你为啥哭泣？鲜血啊。谁的血？人的还是动物的？就是鲜血！ 2009-5-8上午于竹林 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-05-15 18:22:24 Post subject:

Pretty good, I think. Check with Mr. Fei Ma. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2009-05-22 08:38:57 Post subject:

I like it. Thanks! _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-05-22 12:13:57 Post subject:

因是“对话”，有意用口语翻；为对话效果的需要，添加了标点符号。非马老师肯定，我很高兴。谢谢！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-05-22 12:21:22 Post subject:

我也肯定了. 你高不高兴？ _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2009-05-22 12:25:05 Post subject:

能先得到你专家的肯定，我先高兴，并把你的评语转入我的博客。夏日的问候和感谢！ ghzhoudaomo.blog.@163.com _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-06-18 00:26:34 Post subject:

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