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				 发表于: 2009-01-14 14:02:46    发表主题: Winter in San Francisco, Dec. 13, 2008. | 
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				Winter in San Francisco, Dec. 13, 2008.
 
 
 
Its attic opens its window
 
Replies only a falling leaf
 
 
Skies leaving on a jet plane
 
Sun sets west fires, turns clouds into 
 
Simmering coal
 
 
The lamp in my room is
 
Then getting brighter
 
 
 
 
金山之冬 2008.12.13 
 
 
 
屋子開了窗口 
 
唯落葉回答 
 
 
天空以噴射機離去── 
 
西夕的紅火,把雲燒成了 
 
碳 
 
 
屋子裡的燈 
 
漸漸亮了 _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) | 
			 
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				 发表于: 2009-01-15 15:02:48    发表主题:  | 
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				纯景描写,情寓景中! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
 
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				 发表于: 2009-01-15 18:02:43    发表主题:  | 
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				Is it winter? Nah, it sounds autumn in our place. 
 
Beautifully written.
 
 
Lake _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins | 
			 
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				| 欣赏。觉得第一句还是中文更传神。 | 
			 
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				 发表于: 2009-01-16 05:24:49    发表主题:  | 
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				A friend sent this to me today. I think this is more appropriate. Stay warm!
 
 
WINTER Poem  
 
 
 
It's winter in Minnesota
 
And the gentle breezes blow 
 
Seventy miles an hour 
 
At thirty-five below.  
 
 
 
Oh, how I love Minnesota
 
 
When the snow's up to your butt 
 
You take a breath of winter 
 
And your nose gets frozen shut.  
 
 
 
Yes, the weather here is wonderful 
 
So I guess I'll hang around
 
 
I could never leave Minnesota
 
 
I'm frozen to the ground!
 
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				 发表于: 2009-01-16 06:12:25    发表主题:  | 
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				“I could never leave Minnesota 
 
 
I'm frozen to the ground! ”
 
 
 
Sarcastically subtle in a tender heart, like it.
 
 
However,
 
I went to LA last weekend, I was snowed by 
 
the T-shirt overflow by the street banks. _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) | 
			 
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