博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-14 14:02:46 Post subject: Winter in San Francisco, Dec. 13, 2008. |
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Winter in San Francisco, Dec. 13, 2008.
Its attic opens its window
Replies only a falling leaf
Skies leaving on a jet plane
Sun sets west fires, turns clouds into
Simmering coal
The lamp in my room is
Then getting brighter
金山之冬 2008.12.13
屋子開了窗口
唯落葉回答
天空以噴射機離去──
西夕的紅火,把雲燒成了
碳
屋子裡的燈
漸漸亮了 _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-15 15:02:48 Post subject: |
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纯景描写,情寓景中! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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Lake 举人
Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2009-01-15 18:02:43 Post subject: |
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Is it winter? Nah, it sounds autumn in our place.
Beautifully written.
Lake _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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kino 秀才
Joined: 23 Dec 2006 Posts: 411 Location: beijing kinoCollection |
Posted: 2009-01-16 00:35:11 Post subject: |
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欣赏。觉得第一句还是中文更传神。 |
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Lake 举人
Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2009-01-16 05:24:49 Post subject: |
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A friend sent this to me today. I think this is more appropriate. Stay warm!
WINTER Poem
It's winter in Minnesota
And the gentle breezes blow
Seventy miles an hour
At thirty-five below.
Oh, how I love Minnesota
When the snow's up to your butt
You take a breath of winter
And your nose gets frozen shut.
Yes, the weather here is wonderful
So I guess I'll hang around
I could never leave Minnesota
I'm frozen to the ground!
_________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-16 06:12:25 Post subject: |
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“I could never leave Minnesota
I'm frozen to the ground! ”
Sarcastically subtle in a tender heart, like it.
However,
I went to LA last weekend, I was snowed by
the T-shirt overflow by the street banks. _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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