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hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-07-04 06:19:33 Post subject: 风月无边

风月无边贺朱煜国兄同名散文集出版文/和平岛只有撞出胸膛的风才算是雄风你看那石刻用什么样的腕力把泰山推上了绝顶只有无边的月色才可能烘托出如此神秀的意境啊注解：风月无边：泰山上一石刻，被朱煜国兄用作散文集名不知是岩刻，还是石碑？ Boundless Wind and Moonlight Congratulations on the publication of Prose Collections by Mr. Zhu YiGuo From hepingdao Only a wind blown out of the chest is a strong wind Look at that lithoglyph inscribed with a hand so strong as to push the Taishan Mountain to the top of the world. Only the deepest mind could possibly carve out such a beautiful scenery _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-07-04 10:42:47 Post subject:

简洁，贴切～～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-07-04 13:20:07 Post subject:

真该祝贺，我还不知道呢，名字起得也好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-07-04 15:57:52 Post subject:

祝贺国煜兄弟~

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Posted: 2008-07-04 17:21:46 Post subject:

司马策风祝贺兄弟 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-07-06 04:30:55 Post subject: 敬谢和平岛、阿依、杯中、司马、明月

非常感谢和平岛社长兼总编给敝集写贺诗！和平岛的《风月无边》确实写出了风与月的神机，雄风与柔月融会一体。堪称大作风范，将收入中国泰山诗史册。另将大诗录入本散文集，以作压卷！同时感谢白水、阿依琼裙、杯中冲浪、司马策风、半溪明月等大腕呼应，将为本集壮色匪浅！十分感谢你们，本书八月初正式出版。到时给大家奉上一册，以表谢意！

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Posted: 2008-07-07 06:59:55 Post subject:

先谢过！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-07-07 18:39:09 Post subject:

朱煜国 wrote:

非常感谢和平岛社长兼总编给敝集写贺诗！和平岛的《风月无边》确实写出了风与月的神机，雄风与柔月融会一体。堪称大作风范，将收入中国泰山诗史册。另将大诗录入本散文集，以作压卷！

同时感谢白水、阿依琼裙、杯中冲浪、司马策风、半溪明月等大腕呼应，将为本集壮色匪浅！十分感谢你们，本书八月初正式出版。到时给大家奉上一册，以表谢意！

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祝贺. SORRY, 近日瞎忙, 没查短讯. 刚赶写了一首, 不知行吗? Razz

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Posted: 2008-07-08 04:20:16 Post subject: 谢白水大姐支持

多谢白水大姐支持！且浪费您的墨宝了。诗作《风月无边》独辟蹊跷，另抒神韵了，特别是“完美的月，不是月，无边的风才是风 ”怎么都有人生哲理的感怀，犹如苏轼“人有悲欢离合，月有阴晴圆缺，此事古难全”之感慨。加上“龙”与“女娲补天”的石，又犹如《红楼梦》中的“灵通宝玉”的顽石，显现了中国文化的博大精深与融会贯通啊！附：风月无边贺朱煜国同名散文集出版文/白水完美的月不是月无边的风才是风这是怎样一块石头啊？混沌之月光搅扰你狂泻的思绪卧龙为虫为一块不屑补天的顽石安然基于泰山注：泰山上一石刻<虫二>两字寓风月无边，被朱煜国用作散文集名, 近期即将出版, 仅以此小诗以表祝贺.

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Posted: 2008-07-09 03:45:55 Post subject:

我把该诗歌与和平岛君的同名贺诗连同英译文一起收入我的《风月无边》一书了！这本同时作为中学语文“新课标”课外读本，既提高学生的作文，加上后学生又可以背两首英文诗歌了。另：附上白水《风月无边》英译文—— Boundless Wind and Moonlight Congratulations on the publication of Prose Collections by Mr. Zhu YuGuo By 白水Moonlight A flawless Moon is not the Moon and the boundless wind is wind what a stone it is disordered Moonlight embroils your emerging ideas the sleeping dragon becomes a worm a stone which wouldn’t remold the sky stands tranquilly under the Tai Mountain

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Posted: 2008-07-09 08:43:58 Post subject:

祝贺兄台！！

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Posted: 2008-07-10 04:10:03 Post subject: 问好子花

谢子花，与君共勉。给我留个地址，届时一并给你邮送一本。

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Posted: 2008-07-11 18:01:45 Post subject:

贺朱煜国兄散文集出版 .

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Posted: 2008-07-11 21:41:23 Post subject: 嘿嘿

上回偶朋友回贴，用了一怪名儿，叫“牛二” 偶低三下四去问他，何方神圣？他得意地说就是“风月无边”嘛！指天发誓，真事儿！很雷人哦

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Posted: 2008-07-11 21:44:03 Post subject:

祝贺了！（七七真的挺幽默呢！）

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Posted: 2008-07-13 04:53:21 Post subject: 问候赵福治、七小姐、荷梦

多谢福治兄、七小姐、荷梦大力支持！七小姐幽默过人，风情无边啊，竟引得“牛二哥”跟稍了，以后你告诉他你有一把建宁公主留下的刀子。诸君有大部头，我们多交流啊！

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Posted: 2008-07-14 13:07:02 Post subject:

Only a wind browing out of the chest is a strong wind Look at that lithoglyph inscribed with a hand so strong as if it's pushing the Taishan Mountain up to the top of the world. 最後幾句和中文版不符啊！ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2008-07-16 08:53:22 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

风月无边只有撞出胸膛的风
才算是雄风
你看那石刻
用什么样的腕力
把泰山推上了绝顶
只有无边的月色
才可能烘托出
如此神秀的意境啊

Only a wind brown out of the chest
is a strong wind
Look at that lithoglyph
inscribed with a hand so strong
as to push the Taishan Mountain
to the top of the world.
Only the deepest mind
could possibly carve out
such a beautiful scenery
...

brown -是否应为 blown ?

同意下面戴玨的意见"最後幾句和中文版不符啊！"

只有无边的月色
才可能烘托出
如此神秀的意境啊

Only the deepest mind
could possibly carve out
such a beautiful scenery
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Posted: 2008-07-16 09:17:26 Post subject:

朱煜国 wrote:

我把该诗歌与和平岛君的同名贺诗连同英译文一起收入我的《风月无边》一书了！这本同时作为中学语文“新课标”课外读本，既提高学生的作文，加上后学生又可以背两首英文诗歌了。 Very Happy

另：附上白水《风月无边》英译文——

Boundless Wind and Moonlight
Congratulations on the publication of Prose Collections by Mr. Zhu YuGuo
By 白水Moonlight

A flawless Moon
is not the Moon
and the boundless wind is wind

how is the stone
disordered Moonlight
embroil your emerging ideas
the sleeping dragon become a worm
a stone which wouldn’t remold the sky
it stand tranquilly
under the tai Mountain
...

祝贺！

作为学生的读本马虎不得。

disordered Moonlight
embroil your emerging ideas -月光是单数，动词 embroil 也应是单数。

the sleeping dragon become a worm- 同样, become 也应是单数。

a stone which wouldn’t remold the sky
it stand tranquilly - 这里，stone 的主要动词应该是 stand, 不然就不是一个完整句子。因此此句可写成, a stone which wouldn't remold the sky/stands tranquilly (or tranquil).

这里提到的主要是语法问题。另外

这是怎样一块石头啊？
how is the stone

有待商榷.

主要是看到作为学生读本，忍不住，跳将出来。还请多包涵。 Razz

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Posted: 2008-07-16 10:38:40 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

brown -是否应为 blown ?

同意下面戴玨的意见"最後幾句和中文版不符啊！"

只有无边的月色
才可能烘托出
如此神秀的意境啊

Only the deepest mind
could possibly carve out
such a beautiful scenery

yes, should be
blown
thanks

中文和英文有点区别, 在这里, 感觉用不同的表达方式更好一些

记得看过一个电影，叫beautiful mind
感觉这个词很酷
Very Happy

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