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In a lot of good writing, the use of sentence is very prominent. Or parallelism, or metaphor, or repeated, or even the row of specific sentence, or the conjunction of ancient poetry, or the corresponding section and paragraph of the sentence, etc., so that these excellent essays colorful, flickering aspect, wonderful flower pen.
First, the poetry and literature used in conjunction with sentence
In some of the best essay, often found that some students use poetry and literature, timely quote, sentence formation, both candidates show the rich cultural heritage, but also shows the fascinating Smart style.
Example One: Historical note of the numerous such "dumb." From the "Home alleys, people bear their worries, does not change its music" to the "pioneers Minamino occasion, humbleness, return to home vegetable"; from the "elite security Nengcui eyebrow bow thing, so I am not happy color" to "a cavity blood ground treasure, of Bella Vista can still spilled. " The kookaburra who can channel but not for a Road "Road", which Ganshou Qing poor, dirt elite, until martyrdom, they are really lovely stay respectable! (2000 Shaanxi candidates' answers to flying in the wind ")
Example Two: Qu Yuan in its "Joint Gang Qin Qi 'political views were not accepted, but" loyalty was slander, "the suffering, still" care Lament sad, solitary Zhong Chu reported "; Sima Qian Bing straight for the book." not flattering, "" no hidden evil "and subject to Fuxing, was able to" sorrow energies, book into a messenger according to this world "; Du although" wet night "" cloth quilt like iron, "but still" sufferings of the people, pen at the end of waves. " recited a "large shelter Scholars," the eternal farewell. They are not diluted in the passage of time in misery, but with all the passion and intelligence with the fate of the unyielding resistance, and raised himself decorated history.
Example Three: If someone asks, "What spring?" Hill would later say, "birds are flying long grass, peanuts, mixed tree"; Bai said, "Flaming Red Sunrise River, Spring River, such as blue-green"; Su Shi said "Lou reed shoots in Montreal Artemisia short, is the puffer fish want on time"; Li Bai said, "Yan grass, such as Bess, low-Qin Sang Greenwood"; Du Mu said to be "a thousand miles Yingti green shiny red, water, wind Murayama Guo Jiu Qi" ... "(2000 Guangdong candidates' answers to flying in the wind")
Students in the composition of appropriately on ancient poetry, is a good way to enhance the literary grace, especially through the use of sentence form, it more icing on the cake.
Second, the parallelism type sentence
Sentence-style parallelism mainly through rhetorical way to put together shows. First, the content of parallelism to enhance the rich connotations, the second is the sense of progression, enhanced convincing, rendering the atmosphere, increased momentum.
Example Three: There is no two the same leaves, but no two pairs of the same eye. Different country to me our different eyes. Perhaps the United States side of the ocean reflects the sun into your eyes is always lively and confident smile; perhaps Scandinavian ice is melting in your eyes is calm and deep; the breeze is perhaps the Yangtze River Kunlun your eyes turned to the Chinese style of introverted and mysterious. Different countries have different land, different style different rain different sun, different irrigation thinking and spirit, and firmly marked above the national label. (2002 Shanghai candidates' interpretation of the world's eyes ")
Example 4: A great man said: "The nation is like listening to the wisdom of a nation." Arrogant nation do not like to listen to, just like the conquest of their arrogance and block their line of sight; inward-looking nation does not like to listen only be complacent, they sit idle, which prevents them insights; quick success of the nation do not like to listen to, only know how to float on the surface, they kick the tires, the lack of deep meaning. Therefore, we must learn to listen. This will enable us open-minded, absorbing, forge ahead; This will enable us to lofty, broad vision, innovation; This will enable us to forward-looking, devote themselves to explore, meaning deep.
Parallelism, described in the candidate's interpretation of so many ways, but more important is the interpretation of a deep, rich, giving unlimited inspiration.
Third, the metaphorical sentence
Metaphorical sentence, is to use a metaphor, with the image, concrete, emotional things, to express the deep connotation of abstract discourse.
Example: What is life? Different people have different views. Some people say life is like wine. Childhood is like a cocktail, colorful, sweet taste of a memorable; young people like cold beer, thick black color, cool at the same time it makes one feel bitterness; like middle-aged liquor, pure colorless, spicy flavor that Your internal organs will be hot; old age like wine, go far Mi incense, you feel the drops of sweet incense. ("What is life")
Example Two: Dream is the horizon of a long period of floating Huang, dreams are a bunch of light rising from the valley of smoke, dreams are the Wushan gorge walls trimmed with white mist that group do not know when to leisure, where when to go, aiming for, dream of the wind in March brilliant green dye the bare branches, Fukai the Heart Lee Silver White Fang pear apricot pink dress, the dream is a stretch of river looming rainbow ... "
Example Three: Language is the coldest month was silent, the quiet pond that is outside the towering whitecaps Qinhuangdao in the fishing boat, is that blue sky in the line of egrets, is that the junks sunk boat sails million points is that the mountain The heavy water vista.
Example 4: moved, such as refreshing the Oasis, Oasis drink, our hearts become the clarity and bright.
Moved, such as smoked sea breeze wishes drunk, feel the sea breeze, our hearts become pure but broad.
Moved, as it is Xinzhe the snow, enjoy the snow, our hearts become tranquil and peaceful.
Metaphor, is evocative, literary language is the best footnote. If the entrance to have a character of the heart, there is a capture the natural beauty of the soul, we believe that all beautiful things are bubbling out of your pen.
Fourth, assume that type sentence
Assuming type sentence, the sentence is assumed to organize the use of discourse, the use of parallelism reasoning way constitute a relatively neat sentences.
Example One: History often gives a warning, if the business had to airing of King Zhou, Chana good advice, what ended up as deserted, died in the flames of the end? If had to listen to Huan Cai Bian Que's advice, as terminally ill and how it expired? Conversely, if the Emperor WEI of QI did not adopt the Feng Jian Zou Ji, how to make Qi "defeat in the court" mean? Shang Yang Xiao of Qin did not hear if the remonstrance and the implementation of political reform, how to rule the roost in the six country? If the Emperor did not listen to Wei Zheng's remonstrate, how can the "Golden Years" of the political situation? Thus, the Na poor speaker, death; good speaker Na, Chang.
Example Two: If you only see black spots in the sun, then your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, then the course of your life will be difficult to find the light; If you always find friends shortcomings, what you Your journey will be difficult finding friends; Similarly, if you always want to perfect, if you really wish fulfilled this desire, then you are the biggest drawback is that without its drawbacks.
Example Three: If his fate is that old flower, then because of his strong will become flowers, Guangyan away people; if his fate is the dark night sky, then because of his strong will to change was starry, shiny; if his fate is that barren land, so because of his strong will become a lush, oily green. ("Life of the fighters" Fujian candidates)
Example 4: If you choose the wings, you will embrace the entire sky.
If you choose a fin, you will kiss the vast blue sea.
If you choose a four-legged, you will appreciate the vast green forest. (Shandong 2002 entrance excellent essay, "choice cage")
Five, compared to type sentence
Contrast style sentence, is to use comparative statements to constitute a form of discourse neat, sharp positive and negative, which received prominent context, the results reinforce the theme.
Example: Some populist, tried their very best; someone chasing fame and fortune, intrigue. Some people believe in "dead money man, dead birds for food," someone adhere to the "willing to benefit others instead of themselves." Some chose to mediocre, ordinary people refused. Beauty and ugliness, good and evil, all in a study room. Notoriety, or lasts, nothing exciting or dynamic, are tied to moment. (2002 candidates)
Example Three: face of the chaotic era, Confucius choose actively WTO preach, to persuade the monarch, educate people, I choose Masquerade self-cleaning, to doing nothing for promising. The face of bureaucratic confusion, Li Bai, shouting "something powerful security Nengcui eyebrow bow, so I am not happy color." Riding a deer away, Yin Wang is the "fear clouds block our sight, just because at the peak." Qingzheziqing, abstinence to run around. Different choices, but because the inner purity and integrity and flashing their colorful glory.
Six, four-word sentence type used in conjunction
Example Two: Spring and Autumn, philosophers, deep as the ocean, Ziyu China, Confucius, Laozi and Zhuangzi have, like the "flowing river"; Tang Dynasty Song Dynasty, the man of letters, voluminous as the stars shine Divine with Lidusuxin, as "flame of lofty long"; Yuan Ming and Qing dynasties, the opera novel, sublime, such as mountains and rivers, rich nation that has Hanqing Xueqin, is "the body entrusted with the Afghan mountains."
Example Three: My Fair Lady, Marty, seeking a pure love; three-shift light chicken just before dawn, seeking a learning-rich five cars, learning and ability; traveling, non-stop, seeking the riches and honor ... ...
Example 4: one passing Bird cheers from the window, the music brought from heaven, collections of crisp, pearl-like crisp.
Trance, it was a long sword and song, saying: "How can my generation is the basil" and laughing away, passed away eastward along the Yangtze River, through Pakistan Gorge Wu Gorge, over Dongting Yangzhou; drunk into Chang'an, brush on a throne, pretending to be mad state, Guojiu Surusumi, Lux off boots, high to make the world your ridicule; wander Kyushu, Wang Chuan and Yin Fei Liu Galaxy, Eulogy Canglang, kai, Friends of the total light toast, give up Gufan Miles, crying Chao of State ... ...
Li Bai, came from nine days, waterfalls, lofty, poetic line of battle all over the world, the interpretation of a soul-li colorful picture of life. ("Life is a responsibility.")
(Editor: Bo Fanlong) |
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