rear judge
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后审判rear judge
后审判
Qi Hongsheng
When I talk in the story,
The car has been out of the Sun Belt,
Always ring the siren in the night,
Such as driver last cry
Once again awakened the hearts of our long-numbing.
That may be fine,
The dove of peace this day the whistle called the bright cloud space,
That driver drove
Drove her vision began a day of happiness and life.
But she knows where life is sometimes a sudden change in the steering wheel to the right,
Black house lost in the sun sign of life.
Three passengers, three gangsters, three had no soul and direction of the evil machines
They went to the driver the driver --- a beautiful,
They use their own animal rolling flower of youth that we can call the driver.
A dark cloud appeared over bus atmosphere, desperate for help among the driver,
She will want to throw the anchor pier conscience of passengers,
We saw dead people in the backbone of what is called a root fractures of the scene,
Silent, indifferent, who have lost lower-case knee in his own personal gold life
They are far from the standards as a hero and even people.
"Stop!" Answered a frail youth finally rise up,
He will use sunlight approaching the thin compartment of the night more and more strong.
He was soon knocked to the ground, as another piece of flowers,
By autumn wind in the blood of flowers to the Yin, he represents just the weak almost negligible,
In this world, there is nothing more than just the iron fist down on crime is even more painful?
Thin youth rose up again, he shouted passengers to stop the voice of violence
Lili falling into silence like a sea of dust.
Three criminals, three were inspired with courage cowardly wolf
They will be dragged into the forest grass driver, was dragged along with a group of passengers as human dignity.
Half an hour later, three criminals with a driver back,
But we know that a bright clouds have hidden life into the silence of the mountains and rivers of sadness.
Driver again get back on the driving seat, she sat on top of pain and despair,
Not only the loss of virginity, not just the evening coming confusion.
Hour later, she was driven from the thin man
That showed the human face of evil dare background should be the man.
The man became angry so thin a lion, he does not understand this driver will vote for evil peach,
He shouted stick to their seats,
The height of personality, he has not learned to decline.
But we see the passengers had the courage to breathe together
Conscience will only drive this car off to go
Move the car lighter, and
We know that real life will be so heavy that we feel the so-called weight.
Gang laughed and laughed passengers,
They believe many of their forces can distort the original pure life.
Driver started the car, start the silent flame burning vessel,
She drove the car to another re-baptism of direction in life.
Car to the top of the hill, to the heaven's height,
Acceleration of the car, flashing lightning over a section of angry,
Then, like a leaf falling from a cliff down
And the flowers bloom like the ink in the local newspaper headlines the next day on
"Crouching tiger mountain tragic accident yesterday, fell off a cliff CMB.
Thirteen car drivers and passengers were all "
We know this is a perfect trial, a dynamic process
We do not have much reason to say no to the driver's solemn sentencing.
Just hanging down to her eyes the tears,
Peace will not stop dropping the rainy season in years,
Let's difficult to leave this piece of wet perception.
And take away the black crows of evil and a group of noisy,
Leave alone the stars light up the world,
This is a driver can do the final choice.
Note: a place in the country, a bus driver driving a minibus traveling on the road
Three criminals were locked in a sudden and forced driver off to accompany their "play"
Woman driver shouted for help, the passengers were silent, only a thin young man rose to respond,
But soon break down, the driver was the gangsters get off and insulted with a half hour later,
Driver together with the criminals back to the car, the car turn rows, young men thin driver to get off
Young men refused the assistance of passengers in public, finally rid of this "otherness."
Until the driver opened the car from the top of the cliff the moment, passengers and the gangsters came to understand
The real intention of the driver: driver with life on them the final sentencing.
The crucial point of the poem is not writing the whole story with the narrative language, otherwise it will become a reportage or news message. Particularly moving story poem, Montage of the way on the one hand exposure to the general public has nothing to do with the indifference of cowardice, and the other driver has deliberately hidden feel humiliated thick unknown motives house, resulting in the final poem detonated tension. The only meeting place is in some lines are too tired Qi long fall. (To specify)
Whether this is fact or fiction, the theme of this piece are clearly communicated quite clearly! If you can close some of the language and structure, it should be a very good narrative poem! (Ming Hua)
A plain narrative poem. If the twelfth in last line "and then, like a leaf falling from a cliff down" after a halt, the extra piece of the tail amputated, and perhaps make the poem appear to be more compact, it will not directly exposed too tempting didactic sense. At the same time, the appropriate section also allows the reader's eyes will not be too tired. (Non-MA)
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