This is a word written in late autumn farewell. From "Chuke miserable to go," a look, when he seems to leave the Jingjiang River.
On the use of elaborate techniques to enjoy a large thick and black Writing from the feeling Parting, has a strong artistic influence, started to write poetry that is breaking the general farewell farewell from the pavilion to be made after the pattern of Acacia, but start with a flashback to Law after the mood farewell feel the devotion to the time of writing sub-breasted recall scenario. In Remembrance of every level to promote and deepen from the situation, but omit the farewell banquet scene. Began to write Chuke would go to the environment. In the "cold clear autumn festival," Maple Leaf fades, "shaking off vegetation and become bad." Off River Tiao delivery, water mountains away. To stay in different places Chuke flooded a guest to leave the land back. He sad to Changwang everywhere, "a dark Margaret River," Twilight. Shuangtianqiuyan, sounds sad, people could not bear to listen long. The horizon moon is also incomplete, leaving only half the rules, is no longer round. Figure varies scattered, perhaps bid farewell to the people in the back left, which means something entirely of narration from the color, sound, images, and many other rendering a chilling, dark and cold atmosphere, thus increasing the parting do more the intensity of hate, really "deeply grieved by it but do not carry" (Yan "Do not Fu"). Of course, the goose of the song not because people become sad farewell, the moon not because of the lack of people and turn into a semi-compliant. These images were infected with the words in the subjective emotional character, with some suggesting the role. Just as Wang Guowei said: "In my view of things, so the color of my things are." ("Human Words")
Through film with flashbacks recall Zuoxiao law farewell, sub-breasted, the Nanfennanshe scenarios. Ting Gao refers to the water's edge the ground, that is, "Chuke" and the sub-breasted lovers land. Synonymous sub-breasted and Fenmei that parting. When they parted, "is hard to fight at, migraine is led by clothing hide their faces", this scene is enough to ban people can not stand. This is the first layer of grief. If this sub-breasted just say goodbye, till we meet again, it also can be sad in the console itself. But this time are "complaining pregnant long knot, no re-see period," is dead from the other students, this heavy-hearted non-ratio in general, it is sad the second layer, a layer of the previous advance. Below with "like" from the neck, presumably to make words with their own territory to start to a new level. While the latter will have no period, if the fish when the wild geese pass to send Acacia, it can be a little comfort from the arms. But this is useless. "If you want to send hate the book, full of empty hooks of silver." Yingou, that small print, small print even if the hooks of silver, filled with stationery, but also space to write, eventually obscure the pain of Acacia. This is a do nothing. It is written himself. Presumably the other side the next sentence, "off Hung sound, Yu Zhu is also down." Yu Zhu, a woman of the two lines of tears. David thought of breaking the sound lovers there are still bitter tears flowing too! This third layer woes. Structural layers forward, step by step turn into the lyric, the more deeper turn. "Chuke" feelings are pushed to the highest point, according to Zhou Ji said is "double layered writing" ("four Ci"). Qing Shi-kun said that "the United States into words very frustrated the cause, the poor sublime of interest, unprecedented, and no latecomers." ("Yun Shao _set_" IV), turn into the layers, winding loop, also "frustrated the cause" is also .
Results sentence goes: "How many Italian dark secret worry, only Heaven knows." "Dark secret worry", it fails to account for, and only call heaven told. Zhou Yi, said: "Halal another sentence says: 'How many dark melancholy secret meaning, only the weather, know' ... ... ... these words more Park thicker, thicker more elegant, to the true spirit of the heart of the matter of course in the outflow, it may be said to do And the more endless. "Zhou Yi-called" Park "," thick ", it is the meaning of true feelings.
Reading of the poem is reminiscent of Liu Yong's "Yue Ling Ling." Two words are written clear autumn farewell, all with elaborate technique. But Liu word order on the organization of writing narration, the flow in the straight. Words are used against the week off flashback technique, level progressive, tortuous loop, is better than Liu word. Zhou Ci speech beautifully, elegant sentences, such as dark Margaret, cool months, Fung wax, gold clay, Qiluo, hooks of silver, jade Zhu, etc., syntax, multi-purpose dual, Wealthy Seiko, but the pursuit of craftsmanship, easy to impede forthright lyrical nature. Liu words Popular plain, lyrical nature, rather than weeks words. Liu, Zhou their own merits. (Wang Yan Si)
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