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ancient style poetry

NanKe child spring scenery
南柯子（春景）

   Tian Wei

When the dream afraid of worry off, spring return from Zuili.
Who desolate open arms.
Qingming, when these children were Orioles reminders.
Both in and outside into the floc Liu, bar side half moss.
Yan, wandering alone passionate curtain.
Still covered with Huayu, and return. 　　Poem, written from the situation poorly at Acacia. By writing "Dreams", write "Spring", write "Orioles", _set_ off a long-awaited Acacia atmosphere, people become far more bleak. "These children", that some one, some, little, Shen Wei, "Mei find the word": "Good views, takes only some months, spring and can help celebrate it."
　　Showings, write the long-awaited hope return. By writing, "Liu", write "bar", write "Yan", write "rain", wait a long time gone further to express the feelings of lovers Acacia returned. The whole word, romance physical things, very poor Gongqiao rich layers, quite charm, yet subtle, writing romance, nor the word Yan Li language, is a complete and unified artwork. Zhuo in the "Rooster in the book" added: "field is not cutting imaginative and elegant language of anti-line, but not of a brilliant side." Evaluation is quite precise and appropriate. (Pu Ren)

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