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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

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short poems (31-40)

(写多了,水分也多了。向100 首进军顾不上这许多了。)

31
through mists
looms a ridged mountain range
dragon in clouds

32
floating cream and scum
cover up undercurrents -
Dow Jones up and down

33
this is Singapore
that I’ve heard but never been
on my “to-tour list”

34
to the abacus
the computer groans and bows-
immune from virus

35
a wild gush of wind
blows water into ripples
a moon floats away

36
wild boars roam
on vast greens
grass bows to the wind

37
a lone jackal howls
to the shivering stars
a meteorite falls

38
after the deluge
a wrecked boat afloat
her master unseen

39
a Sixties disco
must’ve differed from n-ties.
You leave, I enter.

40
the Night Jay sings
to the tune of
“once in a blue moon”

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2007-08-01 11:00:25
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kokho ?2007-08-01 11:27:13?? 引用并回复


through mists
looms a ridged mountain range
dragon in clouds
<> 这首很有气势 :)

to the abacus
the computer groans and bows-
immune from virus
<> I like this one

this is Singapore
that I’ve heard but never been
on my “to-tour list”
<> I will take leave to be your tour guide

the Night Jay sings
to the tune of
“once in a blue moon”
<> You are aware of the blue moon now Wink)


35
a wild gush of wind
blows water into ripples
a moon floats away

36
wild boars roam
on vast greens
grass bows to the wind

37
a lone jackal howls
to the shivering stars
a meteorite falls

<><><> These 3 are the real Zen Stuff Congrats you have enlightened!!!

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Lake ?2007-08-01 18:59:17?? 引用并回复


谢谢 Kokho 逐首点评。

把 38 换下去了,怕引起旖旎的“瞎想”。 Razz

Enlightened? I hope I am...
But it is not that easy.

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William Zhou周道模 ?2007-08-02 05:30:55?? 引用并回复


so many of them are so good. I like no.37 best. thank you for your good work, Lake!

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kokho ?2007-08-02 06:02:14?? 引用并回复


好热闹 :)

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