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 the refresh button
the refresh button
with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
why knobs on both sides
刷面出新
按一下鼠耳
世界立马更旧新
何两端门把
2007-07-20 11:23:14 |
| Lake ?2007-07-20 20:19:32?? |  |
with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
很棒
why knobs on both sides
不懂
why knobs on both sides？
We need enter and exit
just like yin and yang
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2007-07-24 15:34:55?? Re: the refresh button | |
[quote="博弈"]the refresh button
with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
why knobs on both sides
刷面出新
按一下鼠耳
世界立马更旧新
何两端门把
试译前两句：
只简单一击鼠标
整个世界就变了模样
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| 博弈 ?2007-07-24 18:06:10?? Re: the refresh button | |
[quote="William Zhou周道模"]
| 博弈 写到: |
the refresh button
with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
why knobs on both sides
刷面出新
按一下鼠耳
世界立马更旧新
何两端门把
试译前两句：
只简单一击鼠标
整个世界就变了模样 |
谢谢，你要试着把它变 5-7-5字音，俳句的一式。这形式是不是有点无聊？
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| 博弈 ?2007-07-24 18:11:40?? | |
| Lake 写到: |
with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
很棒
why knobs on both sides
不懂
why knobs on both sides？
We need enter and exit
just like yin and yang |
one way to address your question is
if a click is all we need to get the world updated (virtual);
then knobs to shut or greet the world are outdated (real).
is it?
better get out of chair and away from screen,
reach for the knob
and get some fresh air now... 
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| Lake ?2007-07-25 07:05:26?? | |
Thanks for your elaboration 博弈.
And your suggestion, feel like going to Cold Mountain now. 
自由式最有的聊。还要那些蝶式，蛙式，仰式...干吗。
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| kokho ?2007-07-29 13:25:10?? | |
拜读 很好的讨论 ：）
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