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[原创双语歌词] Happy Mother 母亲快乐

这是一首歌词,先汉语后英语。

Happy Mother
by William Zhou

People all over the world are singing
Singing the song of Happy Birthday
People all over the world shouldn’t forget
It’s on the birthday when mother bore me
Not forget mother had hoped for ten months
Not forget the pains and delights of mothers

Happy Birthday and Happy Mother
My birth is the bloomed flower of my mother

People all over the world should sing
Should sing the song of Happy Mother
People all over the world should remember
It’s on the birthday when mother bore me
All remember mother exhorts for her whole life
All remember the wrinkles and smiles of mothers

Happy Birthday and Happy Mother
My birth is the fructified big fruit of my mother

母亲快乐

全世界都在唱啊
都在唱《生日快乐》的歌
全世界不该忘啊
生日那天是母亲生了我
不该忘母亲十个月的盼望
不该忘母亲生我的痛苦和快乐

生日快乐啊母亲快乐
我的诞生是母亲盛开的花朵

全世界都该唱啊
都该唱《母亲快乐》的歌
全世界都记住啊
生日那天是母亲生了我
都记住母亲一辈子的叮咛
都记住母亲养我的皱纹和笑涡

生日快乐啊母亲快乐
我的生命是母亲结出的硕果
2005年5月8日母亲节晚草

请诸君批评和推荐给作曲家。

2007-07-09 17:53:17
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白水 ?2007-07-16 14:53:55?? 引用并回复


给母亲的歌总是最美的. 提

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Lake ?2007-07-17 10:48:13?? 引用并回复


William,

Not forget the pains and delights of mother’s
All remember the wrinkles and smiles of mother’s
My birth is the fructified big fruit of mother’s

"mother's" doesn't work for me here.

Are you refering to all mothers? Then you should drop the apostrophe ('), but the third line where "mother" is sufficient since it refers to your mother(one).

Cheers,
Lake

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溪语 ?2007-07-17 16:31:17?? 引用并回复


拜读

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William Zhou周道模 ?2007-07-23 18:54:54?? 引用并回复


I have been away for ten days. Thanks to Moonlight, Lake and Sound in Stream. Dear Lake, please look through my rewriting again , is that OK?

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