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圆周率pi

Pi
by huangjuan
I wonder how many decimal places π has exacted behind point
How odd the number formation is
How many Mathetician accountsed break the number from one to nine
Zhangheng,Zuchongzhi
How could they find the first route from cloud hill and fog sea
Whether have no end or not
As iftheoaths oflove
Along--go down forever

Even computer cann't let me see the farthest
Limit lengthening
How much time seeking knowledge has exhausted
And how many fans would be curious for you
Who would you select
To discover you more or less

In my dream,you was my a conjugal felicity what have gone
Because first love
You unaveielably become the focus in my dream
Go ahead forever
Your advancement is my always desire

圆周率
不知道π已经精确到小数点后多少位
奇异的队列
曾经有多少数学家为你算断一至九
张蘅,祖冲之
怎么从云山雾海中看出最初的路线
是否没有终点
如同爱情的誓言
一直---永远走下去

甚至计算机都不能让我看到最远
有限的蔓延
已经耗尽多少求知岁月
仍将有多少痴心者对你好奇
你又选择谁
将你多少发现

在梦里,你是我的一段过往姻缘
因为初恋
你不免成为我怀想中的关注点
永远向前
你的进步是我永远的心愿

2007-06-07 15:02:45
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hepingdao ?2007-06-10 15:40:27?? 引用并回复


accountsed
iftheoaths oflove?

if the oaths of love?

you was: you were

Because first love: Because of first love ?

unaveielably: unavoidably?

Your advancement: Your progress?

There are the few words you might want to rethink

Very Happy

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金金 ?2007-07-06 21:41:48?? 引用并回复


挺智慧

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jemmy ?2007-07-07 14:22:27?? 引用并回复


金金:
看了你的博客,没法留言,输不动.
诗写得很认真,你说你是歌手,不妨访问我的博客,blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy,里面有歌曲有填词

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William Zhou周道模 ?2007-07-09 18:54:27?? 引用并回复


问好jemmy!我有两首歌词已在网上:one world one dream, happy mother 你愿谱曲吗?

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jemmy ?2007-07-09 22:24:56?? 引用并回复


周生:
我看还是lake的提议实在,我自己的好些歌词都还没谱呢,这不是说谱就能谱的,kokho也许行,他前辈嘛
我对奥运没热情,对母亲——不敢写啊,太博大了
不过,我挺喜欢你的歌词,全看过了
学习

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