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水

淡淡的
一湾清凉
波心不荡
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浸泡一颗心
漂几丝血红
轻轻撕扯着痛

此岸彼岸
同归殊途
划出一道道痕

2006-06-24 19:23:53
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乐园成也 ?2006-06-24 21:10:06?? Reply with quote


感受好：））提读

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剑熔 ?2006-06-25 14:54:11?? 读起来感觉 Reply with quote


不错!

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尹士林 ?2006-06-26 01:04:57?? Reply with quote


拜读，问好！

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