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 【汉诗英译】第五站：西门帮耶稣背十字架——伊甸
第五站：西门帮耶稣背十字架
The Fifth Stop: Simon helped Jesus Carry the Cross
如果你是西门，你会不会远远躲开
或者紧闭自己家的大门
从门缝里幸灾乐祸地偷窥？
如果你是旁观者
你会不会举起拳头，高喊“打倒”？
你会不会冲上去打耶稣一个耳光
或者使劲啐一口唾沫？
押解者强迫你背十字架时
你会不会战战兢兢地
从口袋里掏出银钱，求他们放你一马？
If you were Simon, could you escape far away
or shut your door
peep gloatingly from the crack of your door?
If you were a bystander,
Could you raise your fist, shouting “subvert”?
Could you rush to slap on the face of Jesus?
or spit onto Jesus wildly
If the escort people forced you to carry the Cross
Could you take money out of your pocket
to beg them to let you go gingerly?
你起先并不乐意，你有安逸的生活
背十字架不是你该受的惩罚
更不是你的选择
但既然背上了，十字架的灵魂
就悄悄潜入了你的身体
你突然发现自己爱上了十字架
爱上了身边这个替全人类背负苦难的人
爱上了他的伤口
他的血
At first you were unwilling, you lived an easeful life
It wasn’t your punishment to carry the Cross
It wasn’t your choice even more
But since you were carrying the Cross,
the soul of the Cross slipped into your body quietly
And you found suddenly you loved the Cross
loved the person who carrying the suffering for mankind
loved his wounds
his blood
2013-3-6 晨7：41 译
2013-11-26 20:07:04 |
| Lake ?2013-11-27 03:15:10?? |  |
这个耶稣系列到底是要表达什么？读者是否要读了圣经才能更好的理解？
几次拿起圣经，又几次放下。惭愧。
"you lived a easeful life " 冠词有误。
“It wasn’t your punishment to carry the Cross “ 和原文意思有出入。
”gently ” 可能 "quietly" 更恰当些。
问好。
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2013-11-27 08:44:16?? | |
| Lake 写到: |
这个耶稣系列到底是要表达什么？读者是否要读了圣经才能更好的理解？
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谢谢Lake的意见！作者和我一起去年去了以色列和耶路撒冷。苦路十四站是耶稣最后的故事。我读完了《圣经》，不知诗人读完没有。他的这组诗，借耶稣的故事写人类的苦难和救赎、担当等等。对基督教了解一些对这组诗的理解会丰满一些。
其他的教诲慢慢理解和修改。
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2013-11-27 08:50:39?? | |
a-an,这么简单的错误都出现了，真不应该。谢谢指正！后面的继续思考和修改。
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2013-11-27 09:21:52?? | |
It wasn't your punishment to carry the Cross.
改成这样如何：
It wasn't your subject of punishment to carry the Cross.
请指教。
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