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河东阳升2009-10-13 15:59:04

读周道模
为良好的外语而感佩
问好

霞客行2008-07-18 15:16:12

拜访并问好周道模老师,谢谢您给予我写作方面真诚的意见与建议,在今后的写作与学习中会更加注意的.

William Zhou周道模2008-04-21 05:54:45

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现代诗歌
散文游记
西方文学　Western Literature
fābiǎoxīntiè   huífùtièzǐ
【汉英微诗】死 海

死 海

周道模

这水比你的心还苦

它死命地

托你 去 生


Dead Sea

by William Zhou

Its water is more bitter than your heart

But it lifts you

to live desperately

2012-9-7 by Dead Sea

2013-02-13 09:55:02
yǐnyòngbìnghuífù
hepingdao ?2013-02-28 11:59:17?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


But it lifts you

问好

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     hepingdaoběiměifēngwénjí
William Zhou周道模 ?2013-02-28 21:37:09?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


hepingdao xièdào:
But it lifts you

问好


谢谢指正。低级错误啊。
Lake ?2013-03-02 00:31:02?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


yǐnyòng:
But it lifts you

to live desperately


or lifts you to life?

don't like where "desperately" ends.

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
William Zhou周道模 ?2013-03-09 07:47:13?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Lake xièdào:
yǐnyòng:
But it lifts you

to live desperately


or lifts you to life?
...



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