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Magnificence

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Battling its way
through twists and turns
the sky
traverses immense space and time
to meet
the sea
that ripples and surges forward
rain or shine
Eventually
they join paths
and merge
into
magnificence

2012-08-28 16:31:45
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hepingdao ?2012-08-29 03:43:50?? 引用並回復


vivid images

though twists and turns
though or through ?

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SLIU ?2012-08-29 08:45:31?? 引用並回復


oh,a typo, thanks.. Very Happy

转个小故事:
有一天,天爱上了海. 可是空气阻隔了他们。天哭了,泪水落在海里。即使不能在一起,天也要把灵魂托付给海,从此海比天蓝。

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hepingdao ?2012-08-30 09:51:20?? 引用並回復


the poem maps to the story well

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SLIU ?2012-09-12 12:31:10?? 引用並回復


Thanks hepingdao..
Tried to upload a picture but couldn't

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hepingdao ?2012-09-12 14:10:16?? 引用並回復


sliu6 寫到:
Thanks hepingdao..
Tried to upload a picture but couldn't




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SLIU ?2012-09-12 20:22:11?? 引用並回復


好漂亮的图片,多谢~

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hepingdao ?2012-09-12 22:36:33?? 引用並回復


you are welcome

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Lake ?2012-09-20 00:24:23?? 引用並回復


The sea and sky, the sun and moon, the yin and yang...

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