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Lake
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西方文学 Western Literature |
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Spring
Spring
In the blue distance
a flock of Canadian geese
soaring with the clouds
arrows home.
It is a determined journey.
All day
I hear them honking joy
to this chilly spring.
Their black heads and long necks
parallel to the treetop lines
like spears hurled
in the air, advancing
to their destination.
I can feel their wings
fanning above, propellers
pushing through the currents.
Some early birds
slide into
a pool of shallow water
still laced with a frozen sheet.
The question is
how to break the ice -
I think of them
ducking under
for treasure,
their full breasts
pressing against
the edge of thin crust,
each cracking -
an opening of a petal,
a note of music,
a breakthrough.
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2012-04-04 05:42:36 |
hepingdao ?2012-04-11 02:24:25?? | |
最后一节很好
an opening of blossom
bud?
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Lake ?2012-04-11 03:49:54?? | |
Thanks hepingdao.
A revision of the last stanza. |
hepingdao ?2012-04-11 04:14:30?? | |
sounds great to me
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