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卜算子．飞往加拿大途中

卜算子．飞往加拿大途中

银燕入云霄，宇宙翱游鸟。越海渡洋奏凯歌，
云絮波涛绕。 远赴落基山，万里阴阳道。俯
瞰山河似锦霞，处处花枝俏。
注：（银燕）：飞机；（阴阳）：白天黑夜、月亮太阳

2007-03-29 14:30:06
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白水 ?2007-03-29 17:49:58?? Reply with quote


http://oson.ca/cpoetry/write_shi.php?cipai_id=18

写的不错. 给你个好玩的东东

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暗香如沁 ?2007-04-03 07:40:36?? Reply with quote


通俗易懂。欣赏。

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加拿大〈游子吟〉网络格律诗歌赛 Classic Poetry Competition in Canada