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冷雨2011-10-06 02:16:37

问好临屏!
我想看到的就是古韵袅袅,其他的对我并不重要。

冷雨2010-12-24 06:15:09

问候白水,圣诞节快乐!!
清源留字

飞翔2010-10-23 18:06:10

问好! thanks byebye byebye byebye

亿七维2010-05-29 13:43:04

问好白水!

李盈枝2009-12-17 01:10:58

过来拜读先生的新诗佳作,希望能从中汲取营养,以提高自己旧体诗词的习作水平。顺便向先生问好并致意。

君山楚女2009-11-22 15:55:12

问候白水忘年兄。读您的作品,主我眼前一亮,慧心灵动。一篇好作品,一个好老师,确实能点破愚顽。

梦之2009-08-19 14:44:54

向姐姐问好! 很欣赏你的作品。

梦之

zmj1662009-08-17 02:34:36

问好白水!

万春来2009-06-13 16:49:42

问候白水兄,前来问候!

莹雪2009-06-07 16:35:14

问好姐姐 thanks

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Memory

<Memory>

What is in our hearts is hard to share
Yet it keeps reminding us
of its existence

In the peace of night, a spider intrudes my dream
it spins, and measures the road under the moonlight
It is a long road for you and me
and an unforgettable one in my life

The wind blows through my hair
like somebody whispering in my ear
the memory is persistent
but hard to share


<At the time>

You flew away
and left a shadow with me
I stare onto the lake
a silver bird passes through clouds
a willow waves at me
I ask: "Do you miss him? "
but no one answers
I look around
there is only silence


<Sunrise>

I sit by the window
waiting for you
with the city in a dream

It is soon time, I know
you must be on the road
I listen anxiously
for your steps

Oh, my love
you tear the ocean's waves
and jump on her bosom
with a smile so sweet
like a child

I open the door silently
just waiting for you

2010-11-30 10:00:30
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qinghongh ?2010-11-30 10:05:10?? 引用并回复


The love can go through the distance and the time.

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hepingdao ?2010-11-30 12:32:20?? 引用并回复


well done
Very Happy

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白水 ?2010-11-30 12:51:49?? 引用并回复


qinghongh 写到:
The love can go through the distance and the time.


thanks, qinghongh. maybe you can send it to wen Very Happy

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白水 ?2010-11-30 12:53:05?? 引用并回复


hepingdao 写到:
well done
Very Happy


Thanks a lot Very Happy

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戴玨 ?2010-12-04 00:55:40?? 引用并回复


白水 Moonlight 写到:
a willow waves at me
...

呵呵,楊柳依依!

It is soon time?soon多餘。
It is time一般不是用來表示將要發生的事的,而是說something ought to happen or be done now。如It is time we were going. 我们该走了。

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白水 ?2010-12-04 05:16:31?? 引用并回复


戴玨 写到:
白水 Moonlight 写到:
a willow waves at me
...

呵呵,楊柳依依!
It is soon time?soon多餘。
It is time一般不是用來表示將要發生的事的,而是說something ought to happen or be done now。如It is time we were going. 我们该走了。

...


谢谢玨。 我刚开始写的就是It is time, 后来请英文老师帮我看看,她加上了soon,可能更准确些?我很少这样用,暂时先留着吧 Razz

等待你的新诗, 问好周末。 Very Happy

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