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call it off
call it off
never start a war unless you can call it off
you know you will never
kill them all
never start a hatred unless you can call it off
you know you never will
kill them all
never start a hunger unless you can call it off
you never know you will
kill your-self
2009-10-23 17:53:08 |
Lake ?2009-10-25 16:43:23?? | |
哲理诗啊。or 谏言. The placement of "never" will make the meaning never the same.
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never start a war unless you can call it off
you know you will never
kill them all |
Why there's a double space here? |
博弈 ?2009-11-03 23:15:35?? | |
這裏的空間我用來停頓與加強.
帶領接下來的兩段似類似的語句.
![Wink](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) |
Lake ?2009-11-04 10:46:26?? | |
I'll try to read it like that. ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
戴玨 ?2009-11-20 10:49:23?? | |
The hunger can be for a lot of things, that's why the hyphen in 'your-self' becomes interesting, good! |
博弈 ?2009-11-20 11:26:49?? | |
戴玨 写到: |
The hunger can be for a lot of things, that's why the hyphen in 'your-self' becomes interesting, good! |
問好.
long time no see.
You got it. |
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