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季节的雨
牵绊着我往昔的爱
枫桥边的船
你还在不在
我可否
把疲惫
让你承载

2007-02-10 06:21:12
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hepingdao ?2007-02-10 07:49:28?? Reply with quote


短小而韵味很足呀

枫桥边的船
你还在不在:
问船而不问人, 出奇制胜
Very Happy

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木容暮又寸 ?2007-02-10 09:51:01?? Reply with quote


领略小诗的意境.

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沙漠 ?2007-02-10 17:32:08?? Reply with quote


精致的小诗.像你的名字一样可爱.问好!

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司马策风 ?2007-02-10 22:05:01?? Reply with quote


短小有味。巧用前人诗句。

问好新朋友

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