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 Life ahead (Kaiku)前路芒芒 (虾公日式俳句短詩)
Life ahead (Kaiku)
There're obtacles ahead in life
Early one who must step forward bravely
Don't look behind for rest
前路芒芒 (虾公日式俳句短詩)
勇往向直前
早春尤未見花發
後望心變遷
註:這是日人最喜愛的日式排句短詩,
是最難寫的一種短詩,加配中文更是難
上加難的短詩.查日式俳句短詩,
要排成5+7+5型,內含一季節詞彙.
2009-05-26 18:59:06 |
| Lake ?2009-05-27 09:36:05?? |  |
Kaiku? I thought it is Haiku.
Yes, very hard to write good haiku.
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| sfiawong ?2009-05-27 17:52:52?? | |
| Lake 写到: |
Kaiku? I thought it is Haiku.
Yes, very hard to write good haiku. |
Haiku is one of the more difficult to write poems. I have written a few pieces only.
First, we must get a good idea and write immediately othwerwise, it may be gone away and you can't get back a little bit later.
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| kino ?2009-05-27 18:21:28?? | |
我觉得俳句（はいく）之所以较难移植或翻译，是因为语言音乐性的差异。
日语中五-七-五，可构成独特的音乐效果（5、7与其民族队数字的偏爱也有关系）。
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| sfiawong ?2009-05-29 09:06:56?? | |
| kino 写到: |
我觉得俳句（はいく）之所以较难移植或翻译，是因为语言音乐性的差异。
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THANK YOU!
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| sfiawong ?2012-05-02 07:13:08?? | |
中文部份比較易，但英文因音節多寡難控制便是難在英文。
Lake 君和kino君，你們都明白箇中道理，我諗你們也曾寫過了！
謝，謝，你們的意見和提要！
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