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| 非馬專欄 William Marr's Column | | 西方文学 Western Literature |
 
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 吊带 THE GREAT SUSPENDERS SUSPENSE
吊带
整个世界
就靠它
这么
吊
著
会不会
会不会什么时候
啪哒一声它突然绷断
让幕
直直落下来
把台上
一出未经排练的
哑剧
（再来一个！再来一个！）
曝光
THE GREAT SUSPENDERS SUSPENSE
the whole world
depends on
it
will it
will it snap
and let fall
the curtain
exposing
(Bravo! Bravo!)
an unrehearsed
ACT
2009-04-01 05:28:54 |
| Lake ?2009-04-02 06:02:22?? |  |
非马先生的诗歌一向以小见大，从诗歌中也可一窥作者的胸怀。
Though I like the sound of "suspenders suspense" in the title, just wondering if the title can be shortened like the Chinese version. I also feel the long title gives out too much info. Just a thought. Not a biggie.
Enjoyed, thanks.
Lake
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| 非马 ?2009-04-02 08:46:50?? | |
| Lake 写到: |
非马先生的诗歌一向以小见大，从诗歌中也可一窥作者的胸怀。
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Hi Lake. I think you are right. The title does give away a bit too much. I'll just use "Suspenders" as the title.
Thanks!
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2009-04-04 15:04:14?? | |
read, thanks!
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