| 西方文学 Western Literature | 
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|  Sonnet XII (一晃八年) 
 harsh work has turned my legs to a balloon
 so that i drag my feet to find repose
 as my sunken eyes see the shiny moon
 my heart is pierced by gloom and pain hence grows
 when you and i held hands in bright moon ray
 you reassured me of your decision
 i thus withdrew my hand and walked away
 but memories had blurred all my vision
 whenever i now think of Concord's spring
 your eyes appear in mine and mine then weep:
 i wish to fly to you on the moon's wing
 to hear you breathe when you are sound asleep
 a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
 his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart
 
 2009-03-13 11:05:44
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| | hepingdao ?2009-03-13 12:09:43?? |   | 
 
 gentle and romantic
 
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| | kino ?2009-03-13 15:28:00?? |   | 
 
 a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
 his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart
 
 
   很工整。欣赏。
 
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| | justjust ?2009-03-14 08:18:41?? sigh |   | 
 
 
 
 
	  | hepingdao 写到: |  
	  | gentle and romantic |  
 two years of talking, laughing and sporting on walden pond reminds me of many fond memories.
 
 thank you for reading.
 
 
 
 
	  | kino 写到: |  
	  | a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart ...
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 oh, a woman's heart. as you know, a couplet is necessary in a shakespearen sonnet. but of course, i am no comparison to shakespeare:)
 thank you.
 
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| | Lake ?2009-03-14 18:21:03?? |   | 
 
 just, welcome! nice sonnet. 一晃八年, move on and upwards.
  
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| | justjust ?2009-03-14 22:23:36?? |   | 
 
 
 
 
	  | Lake 写到: |  
	  | just, welcome! nice sonnet. 一晃八年, move on and upwards.  |  Thank you. i will continue my journey of searching for my love.
 
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