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北国冬日 Northland winter

北国冬日
黄娟
第一次这么深入地了解北方
北方的雪天
天地一片白色
臃装的人呼气行走
而车道,原来平地艰难

都说绿色消亡
却原来十二月里
一道道雪中
麦苗泛青

这么耐寒
不问季节
无怪乎,他们或者也不清楚
春插这回事情
08。1。22初稿,1。25再稿
Northland winter
BY Huang Juan
The first time I understand of the North such deep
Snow north
A white heaven and earth
People who dress in extremely fat exhale the gas walking
I have never known before
Driving on smooth road
Originally
is so difficult

Green said that has vanish
But originally in December
Among many snow ways
Young wheat pan-green

So can bear cold
Don't care season
No wonder they maybe don't know about
Transplanting rice seedlings in spring these things

2009-02-01 07:48:36
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